Reviews for Riverside Gratitude
Angelus Erreare chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Nice idea. Love the pairing.


Grammar: You have a lot of grammatic errors. Please revise this. This is easily corrected with the spell-check. If you don't have one, I suggest getting a beta-reader. I'll be happy to do it for you.

Language: Since this is an English fic, just stick to this language. Adding Japanese here and there DOES NOT create a good effect or impress any reader; layman or critic. Besides, it doesn't make any sense to write the fic in one language and then insert one or two foreign words.

Aside from the two above, your fic is just speldid to read.

Take Care

XiaolinMamodo chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
excellent! funny ending!