Reviews for Break These Chains
imaverybasicgirl chapter 25 . 7/29/2011
Okay, So I had been following you with these two stories ever since the first chapter of "Midnight plane to anywhere". Ever since I've read that chapter I have been hooked and was bitterly disapointed when I finished reading "break these chains" because I knew that that was it, done, finshed, no more. Since then I have continued to browse through numerous fan fictions, reading story after story but gaining the full satisfaction from when I had read midnight plane to anywhere, and break these chains. Today I suddenly thought I had not read these two in a while, so searched for them; I was very gleefull when I found they weres till up :)SO I have read them today and now I feel a full feeling inside me, one you get after reading a very good story for the first time. I love the way how it took time for bella to get used to Edwareds prescense again, I agree that it isn't realistic for bella to just go flying back to him the way she did in "new moon". I thought the way you presented the charcters were beautiful, I've also read many fics where Jasper is just like he is in the books, in the backround and not really part of anything, I liked the moments of sibling cuteness you addedd in through both of these storys. I especially loved the "midnight plane to anywhere" bits he accompanied her as a friend and a brother.

Although where you left off was a completely appropriate, and good time to do so, I can't help wanting more! I'm not asking for a full blown story like "midnight plane to anywhere" and "break these chains", but maybe just a short one shot that shows us what bella and edwared are up too at the moment, wether things have healed between them and if bella truly is going to be a vampire. I know that as a writer you can;t just be forced to sit down and be told to write something, you have to let ideas come to you for the creativity to flow, but could you please consider just writing a little something about what's happening now? It would bring me so much joy to read your writing again, its fantatsic! But If you don't want to, I completely understand, please don't feel pressured into doing something just for the sake of me. Anyway, this getting to be a long review! Keep up the good work and I look to forwared to any writing you may do in the future :) all the best, imaverybasicgurl x :)
JJP chapter 24 . 1/22/2011
Wasn't it midnight TRAIN to anywhere? Not plane.
J.DRAST chapter 25 . 7/10/2010
Hello, awesome. Great finish to a wonderful story. Kudos, Rock and Roll Girl. Thanks, Suzan Noerr
CrazyInAGoodWay chapter 25 . 7/9/2010
looooved it 3 great job :D
sheeiur22 chapter 25 . 7/9/2010
Great ending here
DaisyBell2 chapter 25 . 7/8/2010

cant wait for phantom of the highway update! I LOVE that one too!

ur just an amazing author! thanks for taking the time to write these wonderful stories!
tiffyboocullenjonas chapter 25 . 7/8/2010
awwwww that was sweet
CAZANA chapter 25 . 7/8/2010
Amazing I just wish you had shown the wedding and Bella being change but this ending was good too. Great job
Ali Shaw chapter 25 . 7/8/2010
Great story, sad to see it end.
nails233 chapter 25 . 7/8/2010
splendid job! nice ending. very romantic! good luck with your other stories.
Ali Shaw chapter 24 . 7/6/2010
Amazing chapter! I'm so happy to have helped to inspire you. Thanks for mentioning me. I can't wait to read more, update soon :)
CrazyInAGoodWay chapter 24 . 7/6/2010
YAAAYYYY! was he going to propose? i bet he was... haha 3 but anyways haha post more soon! loves it!
Pheonix Autumn chapter 24 . 7/6/2010
Madam Scragz chapter 24 . 7/5/2010
GAH! I love this story so much it almost hurts. I neeeeeeed more ;) Keep up the good work, i cannot wait for the next chapter and hope many more come after...thanks for writting this

M. Scragz
J.DRAST chapter 24 . 7/5/2010
Hello Rock and Roll girl: This was an excellent chapter! I loved the "two Edwards" at the end. Very clever. And cool that Bella finally killed the white wolf herself; she destroyed her own demon herslef. And now she and Edward can go forward and be reunited again. This has been a great story. Thanks. Suzan Noerr
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