|Reviews for Saluta Morte de Parte Mia|
| khr fan chapter 5 . 4/17
| Sepulvedlore chapter 5 . 5/14/2016
Nuuuuuuu this oh so damn good! Please dont do this to meee...
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/29/2016
i kinda like it but it just make me excited
still better than me though
| Redb4Black chapter 5 . 12/25/2015
hdkhskjsjkjskhsihdjk wtf just happen omg I want more please update soon
| Redb4Black chapter 1 . 12/25/2015
I cannot picture Reborn x Lambo...just doesn't click...sry to any Reborn c Lambo fans out there
| FallenNiji chapter 5 . 8/31/2015
Good luck on writing the next chapter! _
| x.DreamQueen.x chapter 5 . 4/9/2015
I absolutely love this story! Please update as soon as you can, I'll definitely read the next chapters!
| Sasan chapter 5 . 2/19/2015
Fucking impressive my friend pls update soon
| Split-Girl chapter 5 . 1/26/2015
This is a good story but...what's taking you so long...?
| DragonClaw827 chapter 5 . 1/11/2015
... Wow, did you put this on hiatus? It's good though...
| RS.SSA chapter 5 . 12/31/2014
I feel, as I am reading this, that this story is a story kind that I have never encountered before. The way you portrayed the characters strangely resonate with their own persona. This story has serious undertones to it, and it made me think: "What if KHR had been without it's comic reliefs and take a more serious approach?"
This story, to me, seems to embody that thought. Of course, Tsuna is slightly different, and the characters' interactions and relationships themselves differ significantly, but the core of it is still that of the Vongola succession of the mafia world. It is... a strange thing for me to feel whilst reading a fanfic. It is not a bad feeling, just odd.
The way you characterized Yamamoto was, at first, a surprise to me. But when I sit back and think, the possibility of Yamamoto acting like the way he is, had he truly fallen for Tsuna before they were even friends, is a possibility. It is an interesting perspective you give me with these characters' thoughts.
Your writing is not without its mistakes, but the repetitive offenders are those involving spellings, which is understandable, as you had no beta to read it through for you. Even by oneself, it is hard to catch all the mistakes when you are the one to have written it because you read it as the way you have seen it in the mind's eyes. Aside from that, there were no grammatical errors or skewed sentences that I could detect, and that is a plus point to you.
Also, you seem to have mixed or mistyped the number pairings. 59 is Gokudera's number, in case you keep forgetting it. 8059 is not a pairing that I have ever been fond of. (laughs) But then, the stage is yours. The Arcobalenos seem to not exist in here, hm.
But alas, I see the update date is nearly three and a half years ago. I fear that a misfortune have befallen you as no notes were given before your abrupt disappearance. If it is so, my condolences. If you had simply fallen out of love of writing and this fanfic altogether, I will hold hope that you will come back until it is stated that you will not. However, had you met your demise somewhere in the course of these three years...
Then rest in peace.
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/10/2014
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/25/2014
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| SephrinaRose chapter 5 . 4/8/2014
Please more! The plot line is amazing!
| Renkin-chan chapter 5 . 3/30/2014
The whole idea behind this fic is amazing, and it's extremely well written! So much fun to read!