|Reviews for Stargazing|
| YouGottaSingAlong chapter 6 . 9/3/2009
Wow, freaky, my head just played out that first line, film-like in my head. I haven't had it that clearly in a while.
You have some seriously awesome last liners in this fic. No small feat.
Can I put in a request for a Classic chapter at some point? I don't really mind who with, although Three, Four or Five would be my favourites for the Doctor
| YouGottaSingAlong chapter 5 . 9/3/2009
Um, beta-mode here: Yes, he answered. Needs to be 'Yes, she answered'
The wonderful thing about the TARDIS is that she can't be written OOC. I love those last two lines. Brilliant
| YouGottaSingAlong chapter 4 . 9/3/2009
As long as I draw out the 'lax' of 'relax' in my head, and add proper London inflections, you write Donna brilliantly. "Follow me" could be better as "Come on then" or "well get that skinny arse moving". Lol, but it's fine
Um, also, 'haring' should be 'earing'
PS. Computers make my head worse if I'm on for longer than half an hour at a time.
| YouGottaSingAlong chapter 3 . 9/2/2009
OMG! Did you read my mind? I was totally thinking these to next!
Oh, Rhys is being sweet *sighs pathetically* (I should not be allowed near paracetamol)
It's perfect, I love it :D
| YouGottaSingAlong chapter 2 . 9/2/2009
My head hurts. I can't think of much more to say than I thought it was fantastic, and please, keep these coming.
| YouGottaSingAlong chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
But fellow Brits/Honourary Brits will be on the lookout for the Americanised spellings... or just me *shrugs*
Anyway, to the review:
Um, chanting tome, Jnato, Janto, Janto. Janto, Janto, Janto.
Ianto's alive, Ianto, Ianto's alive, Ianto.
Awesome writing, I have no more to say