Reviews for Forgiven
2old4fanfic chapter 14 . 7/2/2019
Killed me in the best way
Saralynnb chapter 14 . 3/13/2018
Beautiful heartfelt story.
Lostred Rose J chapter 13 . 1/5/2018
Love love love love this. Its broken my heart while reading it but mended it together as I read no. Thank you for writing this!
TinaF chapter 14 . 11/15/2016
Beautiful story! Thank you for sharing.
SassYNoleS chapter 14 . 11/8/2016
A heartbreakinly beautiful story !

Thanks for sharing !
clickpic chapter 13 . 4/2/2016
Just read your story and loved it!
Calyptra chapter 12 . 6/24/2015
I got a feeling number ten was about marrying her or something like that.
Nicki chapter 14 . 4/25/2015
I am a crying mess right now. It remainded me so much of my own life. I grew up with my own Edward and Jasper. When we were nine my Edward asked me to be his girlfriend and I've been his girl ever since. He died when we were sixteen. I remember how hard it was, growing up and falling in love again with my jasper. We felt guilty for a long time because we were living our life and we were happy but he never got the chance. A part of me will always be his and I am great full to my husband, my jasper for understanding. I know I m rambling but u captured all those raw emotions so perfectly and I can't shut up. Thak u for such a beautiful journey. It did brought back some bittersweet memories. U r a really great writer. Again thank u.
Tyalieva chapter 13 . 7/15/2014

Don't know if you're still on this site. But wow... Simply wow...
Bell 1 chapter 14 . 5/10/2014
I don't really have any words... I thoroughly enjoyed this story though. I think it was done very well, considering how they lost people the loved, planned futures with, but never got to live... learning how to move forward and create new dreams, make new plans, and finding love again.

Thank you for sharing this story. :D
DeceptionsMistriss chapter 14 . 10/15/2013
This is a beautiful fanfiction, never give up writing.
chanur chapter 14 . 10/3/2013
This story was beautiful. Thanks
meelee72 chapter 14 . 9/10/2013
Oh, be still, my heart. *sigh*
That was a beautiful, heart breaking, lovely, gut wrenching, absolutely amazing story. A journey of discovery, of frienship, of healing, of love.
.. He is so sweet to her.
I LoVeD all the characters. Rosalie was fabulous. Emmett, lovable, as ever. - Charlie was quiet, but strong. Adored Carlisle, & Esme was ever the angel.
- I loved ur Edward. His presense was strong, his personality bigger than life. He seemed joyful & excited all of the time. :) - Alice, lovely as ever. Even ol Mike was nice. - & anybody I left out. :) Loved em all. - Thank u for sharing ur work.
- I adored it. ... hate that it's over. I'll have to find something else of urs to read. :))
meelee72 chapter 13 . 9/9/2013
Agh, can't type thru the bleary vision caused by tears.
- That was beyond beautiful. Far beyond. I loved it & I believe Edward & Alice would have wanted it that way.
meelee72 chapter 12 . 9/9/2013
That was lovely.

& I guess we'll have to deal w/ #10... Leave it to Rosie. :)
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