Reviews for The Midnight Club
LeafSoto chapter 2 . 1/13
Nice. I have this game so I may have to write my own story sometime.
The Silent Gentleman chapter 2 . 8/21/2010
Not bad, I like the way you keep to the game storyline, yet personalise it at the same time with the perspective of the racer. You're grammar is good and the ideas for races are nice... but maybe put a little more detail into at least some races, keep the reader in suspense. Things like the racer is about to lose, but then sees a convenient shortcut, or tries a technique of knocking the rear wheels of the car in front, making it donut or something. Other than that, it's good.
NeverDreamsOfMe chapter 2 . 4/15/2010
Not a bad story! :D I love Midnight Club, I've got a fanfic in mind for this :B Anyway, keep it up!
Requiem For Absolution chapter 2 . 9/21/2009

This is a neat little story you've got going here, and it's gotten my interest. I think you need to space out the dialogue a little bit more, but other than that, good work with this story and I hope you'll update soon.