Reviews for Whoops
melisse chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
Maybe not that great, but lovely to read nonetheless... ;) I especially liked the ending, since really what else can you say if you lost such a valuable item.

I was also quite fond of the description in this line:

Ishizu Ishtar gasped and leaned far over the railing to watch helplessly, shock welling up from within her, as the Millennium Necklace was dragged further beneath the surface of the ocean by the reckless current, until it was nothing more than a glimmer reflecting the sun's rays, and then, invisible to the darkness.

That was a lovely (not the best adjective to use, but I can't seem to find the right one right now) description.