|Reviews for Addicted|
| Ubersupersloth chapter 3 . 11/3/2013
I want to fuck you with a rake! XD
| SeigZeon chapter 4 . 11/28/2010
awww ok chapter meh _
| SeigZeon chapter 3 . 11/28/2010
haha good good love it
haha nice u fucker good one
wtf everything going to shit for souji huh :DDD
great fing chapter
| SeigZeon chapter 2 . 11/28/2010
best part of all MGS is "snake?snake?SNAAAKE" love that part
hahahaha a water gun thats beyond funny thats something from the relms of the gods
what? naoto did what hahahaha
great chapter :D FTW
| SeigZeon chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
haha shut up fuuka so funny :D
sorry naoto not that easy hehe
sorry naoto again poor girl :(
did she do it? tell me noooooo
great chapter :DDD
| Patcheresu chapter 3 . 7/7/2010
Hilarious, man. You ready for your ass whoopin'?
| Mocca-Marocchi chapter 4 . 10/2/2009
After seeing Souji playing Left 4 Dead like a crazy in the previous chapter, I'm very surprised seeing him playing Hello Kitty Online!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
| BonusParts chapter 4 . 9/29/2009
No one understands just how effin' great that kitty is... :D For some reason, I laughed a lot during this chapter. Perhaps thinking of Souji being a rabid Hello Kitty fan.
However, there are a couple of misspellings (mostly "a" that should be "an" and the like), and some punctuation errors. I realize that this is a crackfic and it's meant to be just pure funny fun, but if you read through it a bit more critically - or you could get a beta reader who's interested in just looking at grammar and punctuation - it could read a lot more smoothly.
Still, it's pretty funny to see some of my favorite characters acting in ways I would never expect, and could never write myself! :)
| Hikaru Yamamoto chapter 3 . 9/18/2009
Good stuff man,I feel awful for Souji though,Killing his X-Box and getting eaten by hordes of zombies.
| agrhedrj4 chapter 2 . 9/16/2009
this was hilarious! it was probably funnier cause i know what you're talking about...i cried for raiden...
| Hellbreaker chapter 2 . 9/15/2009
I have to agree with Yukiko on that part of the game. It is very emotional, but you have to go through it just to face Liquid. I like to how Teddie would be like if he Resident Evil 5 for the first time.
| tetsuia chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Oh god, poor Naoto. Naoto dies in-game and out-of-game. DX.
| heylalaa chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
yep, too much p3 for naoto, yeah. xD
another good crack oneshot. hilarious.
thanks for the read. :)
| Hikaru Yamamoto chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Ha!This was great,Naoto trying to shoot herself like SEES write more!I wanna know what else you come up with.
| PokehTurtle chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Haha, that's some good stuff. Made me laugh.