Reviews for Bleakness in the End
JMHthe3rd chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Surely the Time Traveler would have unscrewed the control levers off his machines before leaving it unattended? It's what he did in the book, and given that the Morlocks had already stolen his machine once, it's not the sort of thing he'd forget.
greed chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
amazing story! ples keep writing! i wanted to find a story that lil weena servied the fier! and here it is. ples dont kill her latter on!
Doctor Time chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
good short fiction, really good, I mean it really really superduper fantastic, but I have one question for you, what does the end of time look like? I would love to see more of this, and you know the machine might have broken down and locked the two travalers there that would have been awsome, but never mind, I loved it nonethless. Glad you wrote it, keep on and enjoy!
verity candor chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
Oh, well that's just depressing. On the other hand, I DO like this idea (I just wish you had expanded it a little more - make the race to the Time Machine more dramatic, maybe?)On the whole, nice work!