|Reviews for Bundles of Joy|
| shetan83 chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Hrm, I like the idea of it, but there's moments where I'm jolted out of the story. For example, "hot liaison" would not be something that either of them would say, given the language that Carey uses. Even D'Angelines have their own slang, and "hot" is not part of that. I don't remember if Carey uses "hey" as a greeting either.