|Reviews for Heavy Breathing|
| TenshiANGEL chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
I really enjoyed reading. It was funny. Sure, some of it was angsty and there were some misunderstandings, but generally I got a laugh out of it because Sirius and Harry were adorable. I'm sorry if you don't understand what I mean, but that's just the truth. Anyways, I'm glad Sirius and Harry got together, they really suit each other. They are so similar in their backgrounds, (neglectful, hateful and controlling families, miserable childhoods, different from their families, made to feel less than they are because of their differences), but they are so different as well. Sirius; confident to the point of arrogant, naturally sexy and elegant, extremely intelligent and talented but not likely to show it off unless he feels like he has to, dare-devil type who deliberately breaks rules and enjoys chaos. Harry; instinctively kind, caring, toes, and sometimes steps over, the line, smart but hides it, confident in what's he's doing if not himself, reckless, etc. There is more, of course, in both of their personalities, but I don't feel like writing a biography. I hope you write more involving this particular pairing. Oh, and I'm so, so sorry for babbling. It can be a bad habit sometimes.
| EmeraldGrey57 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Omg! I love it!
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| Kimmimaru chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
Nice story, if a little too sickly for my tastes, but generally well written. (I just can't see canon Sirius being much of a romantic tbh, but thats just me...lol) Only problem I had was that Sirius doesn't have blue eyes, they're grey and his hair is straight and its usually described as falling elegantly into his eyes so he keeps having to push it out of the way. I'm not having a go at you specifically, but its a recurring mistake and I know I'm being pedantic and I apologise but it bugs me...a lot. (Don't worry, you're not the only one who describes Sirius with blue eyes) Also, Harry Potter has jet black hair! Other than that and the ott soppiness, it was well written and a nice easy pace, it flowed well and your descriptions were alright. :) (And I'm really NOT a fan of Sev/Remus pairing...sorry.)
Hope i haven't offended you, and thanks for writing.
| Angelpoppet chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
ZOMG! There is just not enough Harry/Sirius in the world! I adore this fic and you for being awesome enough to share it ;D
| Sanity and Katlin chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
OMG! First you feel bad for Harry, then Sirius, then Harry again, then Sirius again and the Harry! And yet I am insainly jealus!... What a way to lose your V card!
| kittyzero chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
AHAHA! Loved that ending C:
| BelovedShadow chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
OH MY FUCKING JESUS! THIS WAS SOOOO AMAZING!
| Jessarie chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
brilliant, there are not enough good Harry/Sirius stories out there...
everyone was actually in character for the most part and snape is sometimes hard to keep in character and you did wonderful.
love the way they come together in the end. lots of smiles :)
| indiefilm chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
This was such a hot story, and I'm glad you let the tension build before that amazing sex scene. Love this pairing! It was nice to change to read a Sirius/Harry fic that wasn't plagued by solemn darkness. Lovely.
| SugarCrumbs chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
definitely my favorite story of sirius and harry by far
unfortunately this couple isn't as popular as draco/harry or even snape/harry [god knows whyyy . even though the relationship b/t severous and harry is sometimes very cute] its nice to see a good fanfiction of this (:
WE DEFINITELY NEED MORE SIRIUS/HARRY [my favorite pairing 3]
I hope there will be a chance of you writing one in the future~ :D
| FRK921 chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
I'm blushing here!
That was great though
| Unidentified Writing Object chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
I love it. One of my favorite Sirius/Harry stories now. 3
| Haunt of twilight chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
An awesome and HOT story! I love it and this pair. I adore most pairings with Harry.
| utterlyconfusedlover chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
wonderous simply wonderous
| rachybaby chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
lol poor sirius! good story, tho 1 complaint...REMUS AND SEVERUS? R U MAD? Still good tho XD