Drivel, it changes so much, yet almost everything's the same, nonsensical plot, redicolously overpowered mary sue as main character.

good job

Normally i dont post reviews or anything like that but i was just reading away at this and then seen at the that it said "we have reach chapter 30" holy shit dude the last i even checked i was on like idk 5 and that was also around like errr 2 am and now its 4 am. This is one hellva good story to keep me so into it for so long. Amazing job on it. Brava ️

Filthy white trash Alice was given too much importance by the cunt writing

Fuck you, Alice, and this cunt writer

Where will the fucked up cunt Alice unpack 10 suitcases? This cunt of a writer just gave ito this manipulative excitable bitch Alice character

Pity the excitable fuck up Alice had to know beforehand and the freak is still manipulating her relationship with the dumb cunt Bella

Alice the screwed up mental case

Ironic that the freak Alice didn't see this happen once they decided to play baseball. The fucked in the head and shopping obsessed cunt only interferes when it comes to Edward and Bella

Alice is an interfering bitch and this story would have been better if Bella stood up to the freak.

Manipulative bitch Alice

Another story with the freak bitch Alice obsessed with shopping.
It's stupid that Bella can't do anything to the sexual predator Mike Newton

Bravo! And thank you.

I've LOVED this story & appreciate all the twists & turns you've written in.

Thanks for this EPOV!