Reviews for The Lesser Twin
Guest chapter 11 . 2/20
DarkSolaris57 chapter 11 . 12/11/2016
Basically harry always gets his way because he is a thirteen y/o boy whos smarter and or more powerful than a goddess who is 500 times his age. You should have let O'niel die
Guest chapter 11 . 10/23/2016
You've lost a reader
Your spelling in some places is horrid
Your explanation of dates and time for flashbacks is pathetic
And your grammar isn't even worth trying to explain
Guest chapter 4 . 10/22/2016
He began to afraid of this person IS NOT a sentence
Guest chapter 4 . 10/22/2016
You keep putting the wrong ending on words
Accidently killed. Not accident killed
Noticed that in other chapters too
Guest chapter 17 . 12/19/2014
This is one of the best Harry Potter and SG1 crossover I have ever read.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/19/2013
Harry is a moronic idiot yet again...hurray..
Guest chapter 3 . 7/28/2013
If Harry hasn't been in his first year yet, and he's only known Hagrid during the two days between Hagrid breaking down the shack door and taking Harry to buy school supplies, how could he have been exposed to the wizarding culture enough to start swearing by Merlin?
bill560682 chapter 9 . 6/12/2013
in the 100 days show they found

nanites that controlled aging

would they not be able to give

these to thor and the controller

for it so they could have each

clone live to say a million years

old. that way they could live long

enough to fix the problem with

the cloning? they could then take

any of their people in storage out

and have 10 times if not 100 times

more people and thereby ships to

fight the bugs? also they could

likely spare some people to keep

a closer eye on the snakes as well.

an yes i know they needed to die

so they could give everything they

were in the form of the super ship

to the sgc to fight the ori, but if

there is no vala then there is no

ori to worry about. an the only

reason vala was brought into the

show other then to be mother to

the orisi was to be the one to get

the blame for touching things she

should not. daniel can only do

that so many times before jack

would shoot him in the head or

the general would ground him

from all off world missions.

personally i think it would have

happened by end of season 2 or

end of season 3 at the latest. i

think thore's people need to take

a page from carters play book

and start blowing up suns, if they

can figure out a way to take a sun

from normal to boom in say 1.3

seconds you send in a remote

controlled cargo ship in near the

sun and then drive it right into it.

1.3 seconds later no more

replacators in that solar system.

an yes i know that would wipe out

the ida gallaxy but the

replacators are already doing

that anyway.

as to the show were the tokra are

going to poison the system lords i

think it would be better if the

poison were slow acting and was

airborn as it's form of transfer

from snakehead to snakehead

with a lifespan of 2 years from the

first use. this way every system

lord ends up infecting their

troops and at the end of the 2

years the virus attacks the

snakeheads everywhere killing

them then dies off. if you only

attack the system lords

themselves you are only taking

them out then minor system lords

take their place an even if you

take out all the system lords the

baby snakeheads in the jaffa will

grow up into adult snakeheads

sooner or later so you are only

slowing them down for a

moment. this way everyone of

them are dead an all you need to

do is go planet to planet

collecting the children who have

no baby snakehead in them yet

and have thore's people change

their D.N.A. so they never end up

needing a baby snakehead.

in the show were daniel tells

catherin her long lost boyfriend

may still be alive and the general

chews him out for it i think daniel

should bitch slap him and remind

him who in fact owns the stargate

namely catherin. catherin in the

movie was running the program

not the goverment. so she could

walk in at any time and order the

general to pack up everything.

as far as the ori go the ancients

should have more powerful ships

then them. the reason being what

the ori 'gods' know is limited. if it

was not then they would have

attacked the milky way and ida

gallaxies years ago, until stupid

vala and daniel showed up in the

ori home gallaxy they had no clue

there was other life out there.

which means as far as tech goes

they stopped building better stuff

once they all ascended which

likely happened shortly after the

first ones showed their 'super

god' powers to the rest. so as long

as you keep the fight out of the ori

gallaxy were the ascended ori can

strengthen their troops you can

beat them every time. you figure

the ori ascended 1 million years

ago maybe even as long as 5

million years ago so that is a long

time to come up with new tech.

an when ever you run into a

system lord do not stop to talk

and NEVER shoot his guards first

ALWAYS put a bullet right into the

system lord's head then put 10

more. then kill his guards, then

toss his body into the nearest sun.
bill560682 chapter 6 . 6/12/2013
now when i wiped dumbledores memory of the meeting with harry i would have entered a new idea namely that harry had in fact died in the chamber if only breafly and tom's soul is what went to the after life not harry's so fawks was able to then save harry. that poison was from a 1,000 year old snake an as a result should have killed harry in seconds not a minute. with this idea now in dumbledores head he will not think that harry in fact needs to die to finish off voldimorte.
bill560682 chapter 5 . 6/12/2013
if this goa'uld wants to show harry dumbledore is not a friend she should use his own memories against him. why send hagrid to tell harry about wizarding world? who told the world about the night his parents died? who dropped him off at the dursleys, and on who's orders? the weasley's at the train station at start of first year, molly had 5 kids already at or who had gone to hogwarts plus she herself went to hogwarts so the meeting was a total setup. an why would hagrid tell harry to follow the spiders unless he knew what they would tell harry?
bill560682 chapter 4 . 6/12/2013
now if this gou'ald really wants to have some say in things without making an enemy of harry she should suck the knowledge out of voldimorts horclux and trade it with harry as well as her own knowledge.
bill560682 chapter 2 . 6/12/2013
a gou'ald would have to birth thousands of baby snakeheads every week just to keep up with the number of losses do to everyday little fights with the other system lords. also this everyday fighting is how you help keep the minor system lords under you from growing their troops to big by sending them into this fight or that fight every once in a while.
bill560682 chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
well as far as the idea of any goa'uld being able to become a queen the answer is yes. think about it each jaffa has to have a little snakehead running around inside them and each system lord has millions of jaffa under them. since you can not just go down to the local super walmart and buy baby snakeheads for your troops you have to get them someplace? an you can not just go to any old queen for baby snakeheads because the queen who births them will make sure those babies are loyal to her when they grow up and take hosts. so each goa'uld has to be their own queen to be able to create loyal goa'uld. system lords are constantly fighting about everything 'who let the cat out', 'who left the milk on the sink', ' who forgot to put the seat down on the toilet", "who is playing their music too load', an they could lose 10,000 jaffa in a single fight with each other so they need to be able to replace those troops. an what of the former system lords in exile you think they can just go down to the local super walmart to buy 10 millions baby snakeheads to use to rebuild their army.
gaul1 chapter 17 . 3/28/2013
Good chapter, bye
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