|Reviews for The Lesser Twin|
| Guest chapter 17 . 12/19/2014
This is one of the best Harry Potter and SG1 crossover I have ever read.
| Guest chapter 6 . 11/19/2013
Harry is a moronic idiot yet again...hurray..
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/28/2013
If Harry hasn't been in his first year yet, and he's only known Hagrid during the two days between Hagrid breaking down the shack door and taking Harry to buy school supplies, how could he have been exposed to the wizarding culture enough to start swearing by Merlin?
| bill560682 chapter 9 . 6/12/2013
in the 100 days show they found
nanites that controlled aging
would they not be able to give
these to thor and the controller
for it so they could have each
clone live to say a million years
old. that way they could live long
enough to fix the problem with
the cloning? they could then take
any of their people in storage out
and have 10 times if not 100 times
more people and thereby ships to
fight the bugs? also they could
likely spare some people to keep
a closer eye on the snakes as well.
an yes i know they needed to die
so they could give everything they
were in the form of the super ship
to the sgc to fight the ori, but if
there is no vala then there is no
ori to worry about. an the only
reason vala was brought into the
show other then to be mother to
the orisi was to be the one to get
the blame for touching things she
should not. daniel can only do
that so many times before jack
would shoot him in the head or
the general would ground him
from all off world missions.
personally i think it would have
happened by end of season 2 or
end of season 3 at the latest. i
think thore's people need to take
a page from carters play book
and start blowing up suns, if they
can figure out a way to take a sun
from normal to boom in say 1.3
seconds you send in a remote
controlled cargo ship in near the
sun and then drive it right into it.
1.3 seconds later no more
replacators in that solar system.
an yes i know that would wipe out
the ida gallaxy but the
replacators are already doing
as to the show were the tokra are
going to poison the system lords i
think it would be better if the
poison were slow acting and was
airborn as it's form of transfer
from snakehead to snakehead
with a lifespan of 2 years from the
first use. this way every system
lord ends up infecting their
troops and at the end of the 2
years the virus attacks the
snakeheads everywhere killing
them then dies off. if you only
attack the system lords
themselves you are only taking
them out then minor system lords
take their place an even if you
take out all the system lords the
baby snakeheads in the jaffa will
grow up into adult snakeheads
sooner or later so you are only
slowing them down for a
moment. this way everyone of
them are dead an all you need to
do is go planet to planet
collecting the children who have
no baby snakehead in them yet
and have thore's people change
their D.N.A. so they never end up
needing a baby snakehead.
in the show were daniel tells
catherin her long lost boyfriend
may still be alive and the general
chews him out for it i think daniel
should bitch slap him and remind
him who in fact owns the stargate
namely catherin. catherin in the
movie was running the program
not the goverment. so she could
walk in at any time and order the
general to pack up everything.
as far as the ori go the ancients
should have more powerful ships
then them. the reason being what
the ori 'gods' know is limited. if it
was not then they would have
attacked the milky way and ida
gallaxies years ago, until stupid
vala and daniel showed up in the
ori home gallaxy they had no clue
there was other life out there.
which means as far as tech goes
they stopped building better stuff
once they all ascended which
likely happened shortly after the
first ones showed their 'super
god' powers to the rest. so as long
as you keep the fight out of the ori
gallaxy were the ascended ori can
strengthen their troops you can
beat them every time. you figure
the ori ascended 1 million years
ago maybe even as long as 5
million years ago so that is a long
time to come up with new tech.
an when ever you run into a
system lord do not stop to talk
and NEVER shoot his guards first
ALWAYS put a bullet right into the
system lord's head then put 10
more. then kill his guards, then
toss his body into the nearest sun.
| bill560682 chapter 6 . 6/12/2013
now when i wiped dumbledores memory of the meeting with harry i would have entered a new idea namely that harry had in fact died in the chamber if only breafly and tom's soul is what went to the after life not harry's so fawks was able to then save harry. that poison was from a 1,000 year old snake an as a result should have killed harry in seconds not a minute. with this idea now in dumbledores head he will not think that harry in fact needs to die to finish off voldimorte.
| bill560682 chapter 5 . 6/12/2013
if this goa'uld wants to show harry dumbledore is not a friend she should use his own memories against him. why send hagrid to tell harry about wizarding world? who told the world about the night his parents died? who dropped him off at the dursleys, and on who's orders? the weasley's at the train station at start of first year, molly had 5 kids already at or who had gone to hogwarts plus she herself went to hogwarts so the meeting was a total setup. an why would hagrid tell harry to follow the spiders unless he knew what they would tell harry?
| bill560682 chapter 4 . 6/12/2013
now if this gou'ald really wants to have some say in things without making an enemy of harry she should suck the knowledge out of voldimorts horclux and trade it with harry as well as her own knowledge.
| bill560682 chapter 2 . 6/12/2013
a gou'ald would have to birth thousands of baby snakeheads every week just to keep up with the number of losses do to everyday little fights with the other system lords. also this everyday fighting is how you help keep the minor system lords under you from growing their troops to big by sending them into this fight or that fight every once in a while.
| bill560682 chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
well as far as the idea of any goa'uld being able to become a queen the answer is yes. think about it each jaffa has to have a little snakehead running around inside them and each system lord has millions of jaffa under them. since you can not just go down to the local super walmart and buy baby snakeheads for your troops you have to get them someplace? an you can not just go to any old queen for baby snakeheads because the queen who births them will make sure those babies are loyal to her when they grow up and take hosts. so each goa'uld has to be their own queen to be able to create loyal goa'uld. system lords are constantly fighting about everything 'who let the cat out', 'who left the milk on the sink', ' who forgot to put the seat down on the toilet", "who is playing their music too load', an they could lose 10,000 jaffa in a single fight with each other so they need to be able to replace those troops. an what of the former system lords in exile you think they can just go down to the local super walmart to buy 10 millions baby snakeheads to use to rebuild their army.
| gaul1 chapter 17 . 3/28/2013
Good chapter, bye
| falseproffitt chapter 17 . 11/7/2012
half your story was great but after the first few capters the backstory was useless and just a waist
| zpm chapter 16 . 10/5/2012
can you tell me/us what exactly is the point of this story? What exactly is a the plot. To me this story makes no sense whatsoever.
| Shannon Dee chapter 17 . 7/13/2012
A very interesting story that I hope to read more of.
| kemo9005 chapter 17 . 7/1/2012
nice story so far i hope you will update soon
| Pump-Kin Cre'me Pi chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Just found this fic and Im in love with it! hope to see some more very soon!