Reviews for She Called Him Lord Orochimaru
Walrus chapter 1 . 5/26
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Kubla Khan
Or, a vision in a dream. A Fragment.

In Xanadu did Kubla Khan
A stately pleasure-dome decree:
Where Alph, the sacred river, ran
Through caverns measureless to man
Down to a sunless sea.
So twice five miles of fertile ground
With walls and towers were girdled round;
And there were gardens bright with sinuous rills,
Where blossomed many an incense-bearing tree;
And here were forests ancient as the hills,
Enfolding sunny spots of greenery.

But oh! that deep romantic chasm which slanted
Down the green hill athwart a cedarn cover!
A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e’er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
And from this chasm, with ceaseless turmoil seething,
As if this earth in fast thick pants were breathing,
A mighty fountain momently was forced:
Amid whose swift half-intermitted burst
Huge fragments vaulted like rebounding hail,
Or chaffy grain beneath the thresher’s flail:
And mid these dancing rocks at once and ever
It flung up momently the sacred river.
Five miles meandering with a mazy motion
Through wood and dale the sacred river ran,
Then reached the caverns measureless to man,
And sank in tumult to a lifeless ocean;
And ’mid this tumult Kubla heard from far
Ancestral voices prophesying war!
The shadow of the dome of pleasure
Floated midway on the waves;
Where was heard the mingled measure
From the fountain and the caves.
It was a miracle of rare device,
A sunny pleasure-dome with caves of ice!

A damsel with a dulcimer
In a vision once I saw:
It was an Abyssinian maid
And on her dulcimer she played,
Singing of Mount Abora.
Could I revive within me
Her symphony and song,
To such a deep delight ’twould win me,
That with music loud and long,
I would build that dome in air,
That sunny dome! those caves of ice!
And all who heard should see them there,
And all should cry, Beware! Beware!
His flashing eyes, his floating hair!
Weave a circle round him thrice,
And close your eyes with holy dread
For he on honey-dew hath fed,
And drunk the milk of Paradise.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
Please write another chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Woah that's all I can say ! Awesome !
acetwolf94 chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Foxy chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
My that was... intresting... the story it's self was very well writen and I enjoyed it...though the unnderage thing was...well gross the story itself was awesome! ME being a fan of this pair enjoyed it greatly!
Jigoku-Dayu93 chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
It was sick and twisted in a way I adore. You can call me sick and twisted, because I thought it was hot. I soooo want to be Anko in this! Brilliant, just brilliant!
CU Administration chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
This fic is written much better than the other Orochimaru fics I've seen. I have to disagree with the first reviewer because I did find some punctuation mistakes, but nothing major. Nothing that should be overlooked though either.

Overall, I think your descriptive of their movements was great, but I think you should have added a bit more details like on what Anko was thinking about her sensei's actions. Other than that, this was pretty well written although a little short.

I don't find this fic dark at all. I can show you dark from a piece of one of my fics to portray dark lol.


Rurucadooloo chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
i like it very much. your writing style is quite enjoyable. D

i can so imagine this actually happening to anko.
krisV chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
in arealy weard way i like this story and cant wait to read more of your storys
corriandar chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
That was a really good story! Write more :)
Shivexyz chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
It was really unique. If u had read the other stories of this pairing, u'd know that their one-shots r in some cases... miserable ! Really !

It's refreshing 2 c stories that differ from the others in their own league.

I would lov try a long shot with this pairing.

Keep creating masterpiece :)
HitoriEdo chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
Seeing as how I don't really intend to go along with the anime's storyline of their relationship. Ones like this..are a welcome point of view. P

erhaps we could both share the 'sick and twisted' title. But its all a matter of opinion.

Enjoyed your story.
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
crazy-lokita chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
0.0 wow this story was real good! u should make more oroxanko D
Lady Taurus chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Wow, this was really good! :)

The grammer was excellent, i found no mistakes whats so ever!

Finally i find a good AxO fic!