|Reviews for The Devil Wears Armani|
| fanfictionalcolic chapter 27 . 2/8
Although your French is almost perfect, there few mistakes from time to time. The main one is " je te manque" . It means you miss me not I miss you. I miss you is " tu me manques". :)
| Sunnyjayne chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
This is so bad it's practically illiterate
| tabimint chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
Nothing made sense and I only got to chapter 5 before I had to do reading. Usually fast pace stories are okay but this was unbearable it was too fast paced that nothing made sense. The most stupid thing was the whole Edward got bitten by the dog and everyone was acting like he got shot. For me the story was just way to dramatic. I saw someone say why does some stories have alot of reviews when its just smut and no plot. Unless were not reading the same stories alot if those stories have plot with some smut I do admitted some stories overdo the smut and I can't read it anymore. With you're story though so far from what i read it had no plot and no smut, and tbh I don't think it was going to get any better. Sorry :-(
| WHAT chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
I read the first 7 or 8 chapters and TOTALLY LOST ... this story has no structure
| sammieanne chapter 4 . 6/7/2013
Seem like a nice story until Jacob showed, I hate the Jacob character, he makes everything either stupid or evil. Most authors make a fool out of Jacob or a fool out of the reader for reading a fiction with him as a main character. Oh, how , I wish he was not in this story.
| Tsuruga-Ryuuki chapter 36 . 4/2/2013
love the plot!
| TwiFanfictionRecs.com chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
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| Guest chapter 5 . 3/10/2013
i hate jacob !
i mean dosant he now that he dosant fid in with them i only want a edward bella love storry not with fucking jacob stiking his filty nouse in evry wair it dosant belong
| Beka chapter 3 . 2/25/2013
Am I the only one confused as to why a PA to a CEO does not own an alarm clock?
| twiannfav chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
t...hank you xxx
| Daggers4U chapter 10 . 9/24/2012
LOVE the nick-names! Perfect lol!
| somedumbgirl chapter 3 . 9/21/2012
Am I the only person that thinks this story makes no freaking sense? You've got big giant gaping plot holes, huge jumps in time, and it seems like every paragraph is an incomplete thought. This needs some serious editing and rewrites to become even passable reading material.
| What chapter 33 . 8/14/2012
Why did he sleep with Charlotte (all night till morning-multiple times) and treat her so precious if he slept with bella and is in love with her. That is messed up.
| aelita48 chapter 4 . 8/4/2012
Bon chapitre, j'aime cette fiction.
| aelita48 chapter 3 . 8/4/2012
C'est un bon chapitre !
Je ne comprends pas Edward... Est ce que Jacob lui a dit quelque chose sur Bella ?
En tout cas il lui a confié la garde de Lizzy.