|Reviews for One Thing for Himself|
| loveislouder94 chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
I like the way you set it out - it's interesting and different. Well done. :)
| YouGottaSingAlong chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
That's odd, this only just came through on my e-mail.
Started off good, but not anything special
'And then, really, he had no choice. He leant in and kissed her, and wasn’t she stunned for it. And on the one hand, he hated himself for doing it, but what else was he supposed to do? Marulian Manipulators usually worked so that everyone who had any memory of what was supposed to happen died; they took too long to discover. He had to get the memory out of her, and he had no choice then, so why not steal it that way?
Why not do one thing for himself, once in a hundred years or so?'
THAT though, was bloody awesome
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
So-so. Not bad..