|Reviews for The Last Day on Earth|
| kimjo2 chapter 1 . 3/28
Hee hee hee! Great and scary dream. Thanks so much
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
Good story! I'm glad about how it ended!
| KuroiHanabixShenny chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
| southern-punk chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
That was your FIRST?
I'm in awe of this. It was soo good. I love how this was written and I listened to the song while it was playing. It made it so realistic. I could picture evrything perfectly...
Great job and Keep writing!
| The-Purple-Bunny-Girl chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
Wow that was a really good First Fic I woukld not have know if you hadn't said!
I would love to see the conversation they have now!
keep up the good work!
| Lady Gwenevere Smith chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Oh! Very interesting premise. I felt like it was a bit short, but otherwise it flowed well and didn't seem to have any problems with it. One tiny litte nitpick, though, and that is when using a word like boom, you don't have to put it in quotes. Bolded or in italics gives it more impact than the word alone, though, so you could use it that way for emphasis the next time you write.