|Reviews for Half Blood Prince: The First Eleven Minutes|
| Deathday Party Planner chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
Someday there will be a HP television series, hopefully you and some of the other fine talents here will be contributing writers to that effort. Well done!
| Bashalinge chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
I like how Severus put Bellatrix in her place several times. the only issue I have is from another FF I read regarding AK and how it works by stripping the soul from the target as animals have no soul an AK would not kill the fox.
I know its petty
| Mother of Tears chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
If this rendition had been the start of the movie, it might have actually been a good film. As it was, I was very disappointed in it. None of the forshadowing that is necessary to make Rowlings version of DH really happen was there in it. YOU should have been the screenwriter!
| CarsonandMrs.Hughes4ever chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
A great story. Very well written.
| cckeimig chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
That certainly would have been truer to the book. Well done.
| Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
Good! Nicely done.
| WarpWizard chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Well done, both in the choosing and the execution. That was pretty much right from the book, wasn't it?
| dennisud chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
very true. I see this would have wrenched up the drama meter a bit more, but it seems the PTB seem to think most of the HP audience has the attention span of a Hungry Ron Weasley!
We'll have to pray the 2 DH films are better, but if they are anything like the book its gonna be a long few years!
| dexterZ chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
i just stopped reading the canon after book 5 becoz the story just got dumber and dumber as plot devices were inserted to take it to a conclusion. i was reading clell's sun source and after reading a passage there kept wondering how stupid the canon version is
| pfeil chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
I'm confused. This feels to me like it needs an A/N explaining why this would be better, why you suddenly felt the need to write it, etc.
(Of course, I will not watch the movie, so that might be making it harder for me to understand.)