|Reviews for Lust & Love Lost|
| Amelia - But Not Pond chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
I love the short and sweetness of this oneshot, yet it expresses so much in a few sentences.
I lav it.
| Calamity Now chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
To return the courtesy you've shown me by reviewing Colour My World, I am reviewing your story. And I know right? I hate it when people don't review. (I read a bit of your profile)
It was very sweet,
Especially this line:
"Axel pulled his lips down to meet his. We do want too. That’s all we’ve ever wanted."
-There Is No Escape,
| vIoLeT bUtTeRfLy 90 chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
very nice!luv it!short,full of detail,yet very juicy!PERFECTO!:D
| Zorbert17 chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
Haha! I thoguht this was cute (?) but you should write more KH fanfics! Maybe have one that leads up to this one?
| Sound Slayer chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
i know i'm a guy and not supposed to be writing yaoi and stuff...
but heck with that fact! yaoi might be the only thing i know... aside from staright pairings coz i dunno how does yuri supposed to go!
hm... if you want a romance fic, i think you can put two of the main characters in a cruise ship! they can be either fellow attendants or just tourists, etc. your choice.
and yeah, i would like to help you if you want! coz i went on one *laughs* but i'm not planning to write a kh fic for some time after i finish NSoMTB...
yeah... yaoi would be fine. straight would also be fine...
but when you do yuri, i don't know how to help you with that.
so yeah. this is my suggestion! *laughs* see ya!
| terra hotaru chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
"He brushed his had across his cheek."
Dunno what that one means. x3 maybe there's a typo there?
Overall, I really think it's a good short fic. xD haha. You should go all out and M it off! xD lol. But nyah, it's your decision. Ideas?
that's not an idea. oh well. Sorry I can't help any.