Reviews for The Lie Behind His Eyes
MissDbzMedabots chapter 10 . 2/9
Dear NeroAnne, I'm not sure how to start (and hope this review won't be too long..), but let me first say THANK YOU for writing this wonderful fanfic and thank you for sharing it with everyone here. What drew me to your story was the concept of 'hate' turning into love. I've been watching WWE since last year only and although I knew about the name 'CM PUNK', I hadn't seen much of him, let alone Jeff Hardy. So after reading two chapters in one go, I did some research online to see what both men looked like, stuff that happened, history. Then I continued reading, I read and read and read and I loved every bit of this fic. Your writing is very clear and it just flows so smoothly, it makes you WANT to read without ever stopping. :D I loved the portrayal of the characters, even if I didn't know most of the names in the story, you really drew me into the story as a reader. The characters were interesting and likeable (except for Chris! Omg! What a smug nasty bastard!) and I just loved the story. Of course what happened to Jeff was horrible T-T but I'm so glad Punk was there. Some moments: I loved Jeff’s cupid moments, when Jeff complimented Phil’s olive eyes, when John left Jeff in the care of Legacy, when Jeff and Phil toppled over from laughing and end up on top of each other saying “I still hate you Hardy” “fuck you Punk” “no way”. But my heart broke about Jeff and Phil’s reaction after Jeff had another flashback and the abuse Jeff endured to keep his brother safe. The best part however was the ending. I was afraid it wasn't going to be like I wished it would be, I mean everything was great up to that point so I had very high expectations, but the ending was marvelous! The shyness, the murmurs, the soft whispers. Oh gosh. I loved it SO much, my heart did a happy dance! What I also really, really love is the fact that you kept some sort of 'focus' on Jeff's eyes throughout the fic, via Punk. That his eyes were teal when scared, emerald when happy, jade when sad. So your whole fic is one complete piece of utmost creativity, dedication and dare I say perfection. Maybe not everyone is going to agree, but I certainly feel it that way. Punk looked into those green eyes and saw all the shades and emotions there and he saw through the lies. It’s just so good. I’ve first read this fic maybe a month ago and since then I’ve read it at least 3 more times. Apart from the fic, there were your enthusiastic author’s notes that really put a smile on my face. You just came across as a very happy, friendly, funny person, which was nice to read even between the chapters! I hope that after nearly 6 years since publishing this story, you’re still open to receive reviews, although my review is quite incoherent and not constructive at all… but I had to leave you a review. Thanks to you, I had a wave of inspiration wash over me and I’m writing fics again. I don’t have time? Well, I’ll MAKE time! Afraid it’s not gonna be good? I’ll go for it ANYWAY! That’s how I feel now. And I’m writing JUNK! One long fic, one drabble and another idea scribbled down. This pairing has something extra special. Since reading your fanfic, I fell completely in love with this pairing and I have to say Jeff is a gorgeous man. Punk is also handsome as hell, but Jeff takes the cake. And they both have beautiful eyes! So anyway again, thank you so much for writing and sharing, and although it’s been ages since you published, I hope you will see this anyway and hope you are proud of your work! You kinda turned my fangirl world upside down! :D Thank you so much!
Guest chapter 7 . 9/9/2013
*wails*i cant believe teddy left the company..oh well..he DOES have a wife and kid to look after cody 'fired'...*bites on arms*NOOO!I WANT THEM BACK!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
to be honest,i never got why people like(d) chris and evan as a couple.i never saw it someone could explain it to me? email- hart2soul gmail . com
Brody chapter 6 . 8/1/2012
SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! If you don't ill die! :/ Please!
TheGirlInThePinkScarf chapter 10 . 4/18/2012
I want to kiss you for this. So brilliantly wonderful! I love this pairing so much. This demands a sequel.
BigSister2 chapter 10 . 1/11/2012
I absolutely LOVE this story. Everything about it is great, the plot, the charactization, the dialogue, the ending...Everything is awesome. I especially liked how you portrayed Jeff. I'm definitely going to read your other work.
YouthAndWhiskey.Pentagram chapter 10 . 10/1/2011
O...M...G! This was awesome. Totally cute ending.
marmeenoir17 chapter 10 . 9/2/2011
your story has made me love the jeff hardy/cmpunk pairing! It was so cute! Awesome job on this 2 thumbs up!
RKOCMJHGIRL chapter 10 . 4/25/2011
Loved it!
IsidoraAngst chapter 10 . 3/28/2011
This was a delight to read. I enjoyed it. The ending was great. I'm glad that CM Punk grew some balls and kissed Jeff. Nice job.
TheYesBarrage chapter 10 . 12/23/2010
This ending!

This was so beautiful at the end.

I really really loved it. Good job :]
TheYesBarrage chapter 3 . 12/23/2010
I have 7 more chapters of this :]

gosh i love your writing style

but this chapter

legit

I teared when he came out with his hair curled like Matt's and then Chris just

I can't. I was like omg -hugs Jeff-

Just. I love your writing

especially for Junk

just keep it up :]
ChantalCalaway chapter 10 . 9/1/2010
Absolutely heartwarming story...I absolutely loved almost all of it. I now hate Chris with every fiber of my being. Thank you SO MUCH. XP Awesome story, anyway!
BYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE chapter 10 . 7/13/2010
Dudette, this story literally took my breath away...I was angry a some parts, I awwed at someparts, I was happy at some parts, overall, I loved all parts.
MyChemical30 chapter 10 . 7/1/2010
Love it omg I love this story it was awesome! The ending is so true and I love it. Lol
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