|Reviews for Onyx Raven|
| hi u dont know I chapter 27 . 1/3
keep in mind of the time line you use, it got confusing in a few places
Just some advice
and Hermione beat Draco in 3rd year
something many people forget
over all a good story
i have read it 2x at least
| Guest chapter 27 . 12/5/2013
After 3 years or so of you posting this and I just now found this?!
I am not lying when I say this is by far the BEST story I have ever read. I felt every emotion and beyond. You, my friend, are brilliant.
| Guest chapter 27 . 11/28/2013
That was the best fanfiction ive ever read you are an amazing writer
| DoctorWhoGirl10 chapter 24 . 11/17/2013
Bum Bum Bum!
| DoctorWhoGirl10 chapter 23 . 11/17/2013
Hermione, yes. Raven, no. I know it's too late, I just wanted to respond.
| DoctorWhoGirl10 chapter 22 . 11/17/2013
OMG! Loved it!
| DoctorWhoGirl10 chapter 16 . 11/17/2013
I like Lucius' plan. Very Slytherin
| Guest chapter 27 . 10/3/2013
look up brain dead.
| Sono Chieri2 chapter 13 . 10/3/2013
You never use 'terrified beyond repair'. Beyond repair is for broken objects, souls, bodies or wounds. You could say 'terrified beyond doubt' or something, but never feelings X objects.
| lalala445 chapter 13 . 10/2/2013
I think it's annoying how quickly Draco and Hermine fell in love... I mean, it's only been a month... I get it, it's a book, but I would have liked it to have had more development. And they could have saved the "I love yous" until later... Minus their offley short relationship, I'm a big fan of the story!
| Guest chapter 27 . 9/19/2013
I was so sad when Hermione died, but I'm so happy she's alive again! This was a really emotional, unique story that I couldn't stop reading!
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/8/2013
I cried at the funeral.. Your story is that good.
| Sora-chan Kasugano chapter 26 . 8/24/2013
MAKE A SQUEL OR ANOTHER SERIES OF IT! PLZ
| Sora-chan Kasugano chapter 27 . 8/24/2013
nooooooooooooooooooo it was getting good. T_T
| Guest chapter 17 . 8/19/2013
so, im gonna read on, but am kinda unsure what side Hermione/Raven is on... she still on the good side? or has she switched? I don't know, gonna find out :)