|Reviews for Disconnect|
| ShadedRogue chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Very nice, I like the way you wrote this. It's rather disjointed, but I think that adds to the atmosphere of it.
| ArgyBargy chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
Wow, that was lovely and atmospheric, and I think it really rings true. Toki is... well, he's messed up, and I think you show that here. He's nice and smiley and kind and says what people want to hear, but what parts of that are actually sincere is debatable.
In truth, a guy who always says what you want to hear is a kind of creepy concept, isn't it? Heh.