|Reviews for A Very Sexy Night|
| Rocket-Number-Nine-VENUS chapter 1 . 9/14
Ok you've gotta hear me out! Dude this ROCKED! Usually when I come to read something like this on fanfic, the grammar is just HORRIBLE. But this was almost SPOT ON! When I find a story TRULY amazing, my mind is able to picture the characters within the story as though an episode of this story really occurred, y'know? Although there were a FEW places where you forgot to insert a word or two, the story itself was AMAZING! Thank you for this and I hope I can read more from you in the future.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/15
OMG! Crazy good story. I liked everything about it. And i loved the end sentence :)
| GGooDD chapter 1 . 4/14
That was cool, write another, although this one will be hard to top.
| Blushing chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
This is very good.
| percy zoe and artemis fan chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
Make the second chapter Please on this story please
| gladiator chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
why don't you have these stories get animated
| jazmeen chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
it is so sexy i will like to see more
| kelly chan chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
That was the best story of all my life
| ScarletVirus33 chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
Score! This is probably the first time that I've found foreplay to be every bit as erotic as the carnal act itself. A very unique direction for a NaruHina lemon to take but in the end it was well worth the journey to get to the actual payoff.
Best thing about this fic is that it wasn't too long or too short but was able to find that happy medium that reading it that mach more enjoyable and any possible multi-perusals to be totally doable. There were no grammatical errors to speak of and the spelling for the most part was dead on, which was indicative of the style and care the author took in making this tale of unbridled lust all the more pleasurable.
Couldn't help but to laugh at the end of the story which saw Hinata informing Naruto that she was still as horny as Akamaru in heat. Nice to see the supposedly dignified and classy Hyuga acting like a slut who just can't get enough of the hot intercourse she was provided by her favorite blond. Makes me wonder what she had in store for the hero of the Fourth Shinobi World War. Well best to leave that part up to the imagination instead of writing about, although I certainly wouldn't be opposed to a follow up that's even more salacious and groundbreaking than the fic expertly crafted here.
Thank you for helping me making my love for all things NaruHina burn brighter than before. It makes feel good there are souls out there hellbent on making this couple official the end all be all of the Naruto universe. Until next time, SV33 out!
| ili777 chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
Wow, that was awesome, absolutely flawless
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
I want sexy naruto with sakura fuck you ...
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
ooh just cummed
| jessica-semnadaprafaze123 chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
uh oh Hinata pervert LOL.
Very very sexy. I liked it.
| sailor alpha tomboy chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
| VampireElder chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
OMFG THAT WAS
HOT OMFG OMFG OMFG THAT WAS HOT AS HELL I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HINATA WILL DO NEXT OMFG THAT WAS SOOO HOT!