Wow.

I could picture everything clearly...

o.o

Do I really want to know what inspired this story? Hm, I'd say not.

For a very strange idea, you pulled it off amazingly! Actually, I find myself kinda hoping you DO make a sequel! I do find the moral a little... tardy. I mean, it makes it too late for anyone who is reading this, and DEFINITELY too late for anyone who has written stories on here. XD

Well this is weird... Also Old-Sonic isn't used that much anymore is he? I mean it's not like we use 16-bit that much!

But it is a good story and I hope that you make a sequel!

XD No doubt the most random story I've ever read. Yet still enjoyable. Wow... don't get too attached too videogame characters... far too late for that. Hehe. Laughing too hard to do a serious review, sorry. XD

...Woah.

Dude, that was AWESOME! XD

Really, I liked this a lot. It was well-written and mysterious, and it was like reading a novel. I didn't want to stop reading!

It definitely hooked me, and I'm currently sitting here thinking, 'Oh God, Oh God, Sonic's gonna crawl into my head, I know it! I KNEW I shouldn't have let my brother play that stupid game!'

Creepy, yet totally cool. I loved it.

This was by far one of the most messed up story I'e ever read. Loved it. Heres hoping for a sequel. JK

...Interesting. Very interesting, indeed. I like it. Keep up the good work!

~ADarknessInHeaven

aka: Sam

... Amazing.

Simply magical.

This is probably your best one-shot. Fantastic! Sublime. You wrote it in such a childish manner, yet so adult like. I don't know what to say. But you wrote this in a way I recognise.

It was very well written. Very well done. This one shot deserves praise. Seriously. I've never seen anything quite like this before.