Reviews for KakuRenBo
C'sMelody chapter 1 . 12/30/2016
You are truly something else.
0anhonestpuck0 chapter 1 . 9/30/2016
Dude...just love.. ...dude
corintios chapter 1 . 1/26/2015
First thing first:
I was listening to a russian classical music paylist. It played Islamey (Oriental Fantasy) by M.A. Balakirev at its pinnacle when Ciel was fucking Sebastian and climaxed with the "Father -!" line (if there's one part of your story that I will never forget it is this one); and Night On Bald Mountain by Modest Mussorgsky at the rest.
The former music, better than the latter, is for me a headcanon for this fic now.

That said,
I'd like to praise you for your superb story.
Such lilting prose, strong images and unfathomable Sebastian you did. I was awed. It was, for me, the best Kuroshitsuji fanfic that you've ever written. You showed a deep understanding of the characters, played gracefully with the fandom's theories, made Yana's characters your own in a flawless way. I adored it.

I screesched at '...2.'. The final conversation between them, oh my gosh, it was done perfectly. It made Ciel something more and Sebastian none the less. Why indeed would he want to reproduce - that's the question that he evaded and that hasn't left my mind since. Why, Sebastian? Was he bored? So fascinating how many halfdemons never find out what they truly are but Sebastian made sure that his did. He 'wanted the best' for his son (This is another line that kills me). It is indeed a behaviour of a good father, the problem is that he demonstrated his love in his own devilish ways.

The ending... Oh boy, Ciel was fond of his true father in his own way and it was heartbreaking the last scene altough I was deeply satisfied with his order of suicide. The last line, I must say, left me a bit confused. I understood that Ciel died, his soul left his body; but I also understand that it could mean that he changed his 'persona'. Both ways are great for me. It was a lovely image that this ending left in my mind... the coffin with Sebastian and the lillies; dude, white lillies simbolizing virtue!; Ciel holding his father's hair, the 'goodbye' (God be with you) !; the 'Now you're IT' meaning his full descend into a full demon was a killing line, I was reading it and seeing Sebastian smiling proudly... HA! So good! So good!

Thank you SO much for posting your fic! I've watched Kuro when it was officially released but at the time I didn't yet read fics in other languages than my mothertongue. Last week I decided to update myself with the last chapters of the manga (since it only releases one chapter a month I forgot about it for a while) and looked for people's rec about good fics. I'm so glad I found your name. I read some of your fics and as I said before, this one has to be your best.

Now I need to read the rest of the saga but I'm afraid because there wont be Sebacchan anymore LOL

I'm totally faving this fic. Again, Thank you for posting it!
Elle chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I have never, in my life here on FF, ever read such a story. It was truly amazing. A work of art. You're such a beautiful writer, it's incredible. I was locked into this story, so enchanting, so dark. Truly unbelievable. I loved every word.
Aritsu Yojichi chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Moony,

The way you write this is just fffffffffffffffff. I finally got around to reading this and my mind is blown! HAGS should be cannon. Oh gods.

I love you Moony.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Hey loved this part of hide and seek saga, so dark, it's wonderful. I wanted to view the picture but i am having trouble getting access to it, has it been taken down?
PerpleTheZombie chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
This is so terribly beautiful and entrancing... I've never been so impressed by any author or story or... anything, really. I feel like I should be crying, and I'm sure if I were to have read this any other time but three in the morning I would be. I really wish it wasn't three in the morning so I could more specifically tell you how amazing this is, but all I can say right now is that you, madam, are incredible.
The Orca Song chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
*hyperventilates*

For the love of everything that is holy AND unholy, that was simply astounding! I've always wondered what it would be like if Sebastian was actually the real father of Ciel, and you've exceeded my expectations. The sex was so sinfully taboo considering their familial relations, but it fit the story. Ah, this is just amazing. Just...guhh.
RougeAngleOfSatin chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
My love for this delightedly twisted stew of demonic happenings has only increased with reading it anew.
BlackInkStains chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Sebastian was Ciel's father?

... Somehow, that doesn't want to sit well with me. XD

Apart from that, though, the whole construction of the fic was good, your writing, as I once said, is wonderful, and the two are awfully in character D

and, yeah, that's why I'll read the rest of that series. I'm really interested on how this is continued

(It's kind of a good thing that this series is already finished.I don't have to wait for updates XDD)
carefreemagicalgirl chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
?...

That was...f*cking amazing. O.O

How long have you been writing? Just curious.
MrMissMrs Random chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
Holy crap... that was twisted an awesome. Unbelievably twisted but still so awesome. And the final words "Now your It" were... WOW!

Seriously, this is a perfect piece of how incredible a story can be.
OOHPRETTYLIGHTS chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Okay so...whats with (the random) parenthesis everywhere.

In this sentence

"Sebastian offered him a look of genuine, (albeit faintly wounded,) affection."

You could have done

"Sebastian offered him a look of genuine, albeit faintly wounded, affection."

And it would still make sense. You used the odd parenthesis all through the story, and it was just words in the sentence.

Cool story blah, blah, blah nice writing. I like it. :)
StarvedAuthor chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Pardon my ranting...

I feel wonderfully blessed to have found your writings so late at night. This was one of my favorites that you've written - well thought out and clever right to the bitter end. Ciel's development is possible one of the best of any character's that I've ever seen in any fanfiction, and Sebastian's toying with him until death did them part was extremely well done. The structure of the story and incorporation of hide and seek was fantastic; the grammar and language and the effects of your style and moremoremore of the perfect metaphors and realizations felt like they were the missing pieces that made a good story spectacular. Also, in a less relevant side note, I thought the breaks between sections were well-placed.
ClockworkCoeur chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
That was gorgeous, and so mysterious. I loved it, and it was beautifully written!

You had me confused for a lot of it, but once I reach the conclusion I wasn't that surprised, as if you'd just gracefully implied it for the entire oneshot. Your writing style is truly brilliant! And I loved all the fairy tail references as well! .

You ended it perfectly as well, as if the story just... went to sleep...

Chir x
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