| Reviews for A picture of Dorian Gray |
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   ScarCharlotte chapter 1 . 7/1/2020 Wow, 2017-2018 had some harsh critics of the non literary sort. I love this story. I’m back to read it again after an 8 year hiatus. I hope you’re inspired to write more like this . look forward to enjoying this again. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/18/2018 HA, Edwards a whore AND a faggot. Why in the fuck would bella want to be with him? And please tell me how lola is a English lady ...Edward said she was fucking oriental! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/18/2018 Wow, Edwards nothing but a nasty whore and bella a desperate slut. Does she really have no self respect at all? |
| Guest chapter 21 . 6/14/2017 funny how Edward will fuck ANYTHING with a hole...but not bella until their married...LOL why would two skanks like this even get married? Its a slap to the face of the entire institution of marriage...why get married if their not going to be faith full to each other? |
| jk chapter 6 . 6/14/2017 soooo fucking a whore right in front of bella is how he found out that he loved her? I kinda lost all respect for bella...well not KINDA...I have no respect for her. Shes such a nasty skank, why would she want to be with such a nasty man whore? And to let some used up hoe inbetween her legs? fucking gross. Do you notice how Edward keeps saying that all these whore are "tight?" LOL yaaaaa sure they are |
| jk chapter 2 . 6/14/2017 WOW, soooo Edward is a used up whore huh? Geez NO THANKS! He goes to the whore house over and over and over ...how many stds and kids does he have? So fucking gross...why would anyone want that kind of guy with bella? |
| Loveforgreeneyes chapter 31 . 12/24/2016 Oh that evil woman! I can't wait to see what happens to her. Best of luck with your move. Hope you are settling in nicely. |
| cbzoo chapter 1 . 8/25/2016 great start |
| j chapter 17 . 7/7/2015 ya see what happens? you treat bella like shit and she give you a threesome...seriously? bellas nothing but a pathtetic victim and a whore and Edwards nothing but a used up whore as well |
| jk chapter 8 . 7/7/2015 jut when I couldn't dislike Edward more I find out he also fucks men...or gets fucked by them...I threw up..just now...so freaking gross |
| jk chapter 6 . 7/7/2015 he brought her inside a WHORE house and fucked a whore infront of her...made her do drugs...and he says he loves her? he doesn't love her...hes a used up piece of shit whore and im pissed at bellas actions...shes a disgusting whpre too...screw your story |
| jk chapter 5 . 7/7/2015 wow bellas a whore too...I cant believe Edward did that in front of her...fucking piece of sht |
| jk chapter 4 . 7/7/2015 what house is he dragging her into? I thought he was going to a whore house...the disgusting piece of shit he is |
| jk chapter 2 . 7/7/2015 this is the disgusting piece of shit you want bella with? hes with whores! jesus..he'll give bella a fucking disease! and who knows how many kids he has out there! Hes all used up and nasty...and talking about a whores tightness...lol sure shes tight. dude no whore istight unless shes new..and by the sounds of it...polys not new..just saying. hes gross and I want him no where near bella! she deserves better then a whore! |
| smudgenbuster chapter 31 . 12/31/2014 I always feel sad and not respected when an author doesn't say goodbye. |