Reviews for A picture of Dorian Gray
ScarCharlotte chapter 1 . 7/1/2020
Wow, 2017-2018 had some harsh critics of the non literary sort. I love this story. I’m back to read it again after an 8 year hiatus. I hope you’re inspired to write more like this . look forward to enjoying this again.
Guest chapter 8 . 3/18/2018
HA, Edwards a whore AND a faggot. Why in the fuck would bella want to be with him?

And please tell me how lola is a English lady ...Edward said she was fucking oriental!
Guest chapter 6 . 3/18/2018
Wow, Edwards nothing but a nasty whore and bella a desperate slut. Does she really have no self respect at all?
Guest chapter 21 . 6/14/2017
funny how Edward will fuck ANYTHING with a hole...but not bella until their married...LOL why would two skanks like this even get married? Its a slap to the face of the entire institution of marriage...why get married if their not going to be faith full to each other?
jk chapter 6 . 6/14/2017
soooo fucking a whore right in front of bella is how he found out that he loved her?

I kinda lost all respect for bella...well not KINDA...I have no respect for her. Shes such a nasty skank, why would she want to be with such a nasty man whore? And to let some used up hoe inbetween her legs? fucking gross.

Do you notice how Edward keeps saying that all these whore are "tight?" LOL yaaaaa sure they are
jk chapter 2 . 6/14/2017
WOW, soooo Edward is a used up whore huh? Geez NO THANKS!
He goes to the whore house over and over and over many stds and kids does he have? So fucking gross...why would anyone want that kind of guy with bella?
Loveforgreeneyes chapter 31 . 12/24/2016
Oh that evil woman! I can't wait to see what happens to her. Best of luck with your move. Hope you are settling in nicely.
cbzoo chapter 1 . 8/25/2016
great start
j chapter 17 . 7/7/2015
ya see what happens? you treat bella like shit and she give you a threesome...seriously? bellas nothing but a pathtetic victim and a whore
and Edwards nothing but a used up whore as well
jk chapter 8 . 7/7/2015
jut when I couldn't dislike Edward more I find out he also fucks men...or gets fucked by them...I threw up..just freaking gross
jk chapter 6 . 7/7/2015
he brought her inside a WHORE house and fucked a whore infront of her...made her do drugs...and he says he loves her? he doesn't love her...hes a used up piece of shit whore and im pissed at bellas actions...shes a disgusting whpre too...screw your story
jk chapter 5 . 7/7/2015
wow bellas a whore too...I cant believe Edward did that in front of her...fucking piece of sht
jk chapter 4 . 7/7/2015
what house is he dragging her into? I thought he was going to a whore house...the disgusting piece of shit he is
jk chapter 2 . 7/7/2015
this is the disgusting piece of shit you want bella with? hes with whores! jesus..he'll give bella a fucking disease! and who knows how many kids he has out there!
Hes all used up and nasty...and talking about a whores sure shes tight. dude no whore istight unless shes new..and by the sounds of it...polys not new..just saying.
hes gross and I want him no where near bella! she deserves better then a whore!
smudgenbuster chapter 31 . 12/31/2014
I always feel sad and not respected when an author doesn't say goodbye.
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