Reviews for Somebody Stranger
Ch chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
It was well written and a good ,You mightve wanted to make something about the awful"...and it was only once."that Miller wrote,since we hear from the dialogue,she clearly slept with Jackie Boy more then once,they had a thing...although lies about sex are a natural part of life for women,I still thought that line couldve been followed by something that revealed Shellie lied.
deadpoolhulk chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
interesting. i think you A) Cought her personality well, her thoughts were similar enough to the way that she talks that it mixed perfectly together. and B) described the scene as well as it was possible. i'm half convinced you're Frank himself, ;)
nocoldwater chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Nice job with it! I definitely enjoyed it...your descriptions were very vivid, made the whole scene really come alive in your mind, you know? :)