|Reviews for Shattered|
| Carolinelily Fairchild Evans chapter 4 . 9/11/2014
| NCISexy chapter 4 . 9/10/2009
I want more. I'm loving the story.
| anonymous chapter 4 . 9/10/2009
nice-just one thig, the picture (ch. 3) was of tali, ziva and ari...but other than that nice job!
| DustyGreyAshes chapter 3 . 9/10/2009
Another really good chapter :) The scene with Ziva and her father was especially powerful.
I did think it was Tali in the picture though.. but you might have chosen to change that.
| ToZiKa chapter 3 . 9/10/2009
I really don't like Eli David...
And I feel sorry for Ziva.
Can't wait for more!
| Mac chapter 3 . 9/9/2009
excellent story please continue soon. looking forward to reading more soon.
| SemperFiNeverForget051909 chapter 2 . 9/6/2009
the picture is so cute!
and i love the story that goes with it~!
| luvztorite chapter 2 . 9/6/2009
Lots of nice detail here. I could see this happening as you described it. I've added this to my story alerts and can't wait to see how the story develops.
| animefreak2015 chapter 2 . 9/6/2009
kewl. like the juxtaposition of the chapters. nicely done
| DustyGreyAshes chapter 2 . 9/6/2009
I love this; the contrast in moods between the chapters is good and you capture both effectively. carry on!