Reviews for Move Together |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really good story. Not gonna lie though, I miss the original. It was on my favs list for years and this is not even close to the same story, you could have left the original up and posted this one too. Great story still but I do miss the original. Look forward to the next chap though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a well written story and I really like the way it's going! Please write soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is beautiful. With movingly poetic language. The characters are fleshed out. The Sam/Bella dynamic is really alive and believable. Bella's parents being together is so sweet. It really shines through in the small fact that Bella doesn't know how to cook. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the best story I've read in a long time, I really can't wait to read what happens next! The last few chapters got me wondering when Jacob was gonna come back but ahh, the reunion between him and Bella was written so well, great job! Few questions I hope gets answered: Was Jake by himself for so long in wolf form? How long did he take to change back? Will the Cullens make a more prominent appearance? Is Edward gonna be a problem? (hope not) ..Will Leah and Seth phase? Leah's off at college so maybe she wont phase? What's the full backstory with Leah and Sam?! I'm so curious haha. Hope to read an update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story! I hope you haven't abandoned it. I'm so glad that Jake and Bella are finally making up, and that Sam has decided to finally give him a chance. Really hope to see more in the future! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. I love Sam so am delighted with this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() She’s just really trying to help, Sam should be thankful |
![]() ![]() ![]() I bet his wolf is on cloud nine right now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So now her back looks like an etch-a-sketch and her parents are not seeing reason |
![]() ![]() ![]() He can’t help that the wolf is stronger in him than the others. But she did a great job of making him see all was ok. He just needs to believe in her more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Does Billy know about the wolves or Charlie? And Jake? Well he should remember that words are binding and can’t be taken back. But at least Paul is trying to let her in and accept her. And at least Sam is slowly opening up and realizing his mistakes. And hawt dayum was their time on the bed smexy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cupcakes seriously make everything better in life. And I’m really liking how things are going between Sam and Bella, he’s dominate but sweet, territorial of her but let’s her decide what she wants. And obviously isn’t the only Alpha in this pack. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think all in all, that went pretty well. And at least he told her the truth and didn’t hide. Now they just need to help Quil and Jake, and hopefully Paul and Jared will like her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welp, I guess I wasn’t paying attention to Billy still being in the wheelchair, but at least he seems more upbeat. Gosh, poor Quil, just wanna squeeze him. But Sam, we’ll Sam needs to realize that even with Bella being his mate and imprint, doesn’t give him the right to make her feel or act like one of the pups that did something wrong. However, I do like that he showed her his wolf, that’s cool and a very important bonding experience |
![]() ![]() ![]() At least he kinda asked her for date and was kinda sweet on said date. Now if he can just actually talk to her that would be fabulous. I like that Charlie is a mechanic this go around and that Renee is still there and that Billy isn’t in a wheelchair this time either. Poor Quil. |