Reviews for beloved
RoseeAnn chapter 11 . 11/13/2015
It's a good story. But I assumed it's not finish yet.
Also, I still found typos and grammar mistakes. But I'm sorry if I can't help much in this, because English is not my first language.
Guest chapter 11 . 12/1/2013
please update the storie it is really goed and i love it
SkyeCielo98 chapter 11 . 10/8/2013
-blush- ilike the way kakashi acts around naru
Guest chapter 11 . 8/26/2013
You stopped in the middle of a scene I feel sad.
AkumasFate chapter 11 . 11/25/2012
I like this are you going to wright more? The ideas cool and I like how she kicked sas-gay's ass! Even if he's a jerk he got the shit beaten out of him so yay! The idea was cool, I kind of want to see how she fights, in one of those two bonded fights thing? Or do you not have that? Idk lolz
black moon inu chapter 11 . 8/30/2012
Damn I hope you finish this story I love it and can't wait to see what happens.
Kyuubi-No-Kitsune chapter 11 . 2/5/2012
OMG more,more I need more this is getting hot super hot. more chaps

pleasewith a chebi fox on top
Kyuubi-No-Kitsune chapter 9 . 2/5/2012
I realy like this one thus far and dont worry I'm fine. two seizors in 48 hours way to much stress but doing fine now tex me soon.

Little Messrs chapter 11 . 3/3/2011
Ok I absolutly love this please write another chapter and make it long. prety please with a piece of chocolate on top :)
10tailedokami16x chapter 2 . 11/5/2010
Dakuenjeru chapter 11 . 8/28/2010
please continue this story it really is a good story
brokendreamer49 chapter 11 . 7/31/2010
Really likin the loveless based naruto plot. very cool very cool. your writing style is really good to and keeps ppl interested. keep writing! XD
dizzydani666 chapter 11 . 7/27/2010
beautiful !
dizzydani666 chapter 9 . 7/27/2010
yer stories going gr8!
geetac chapter 11 . 7/27/2010
I like the chapter
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