Reviews for beloved
RoseeAnn chapter 11 . 11/13/2015
It's a good story. But I assumed it's not finish yet.
Also, I still found typos and grammar mistakes. But I'm sorry if I can't help much in this, because English is not my first language.
Guest chapter 11 . 12/1/2013
please update the storie it is really goed and i love it
SkyeCielo98 chapter 11 . 10/8/2013
-blush- ilike the way kakashi acts around naru
Guest chapter 11 . 8/26/2013
You stopped in the middle of a scene I feel sad.
AkumasFate chapter 11 . 11/25/2012
I like this are you going to wright more? The ideas cool and I like how she kicked sas-gay's ass! Even if he's a jerk he got the shit beaten out of him so yay! The idea was cool, I kind of want to see how she fights, in one of those two bonded fights thing? Or do you not have that? Idk lolz
black moon inu chapter 11 . 8/30/2012
Damn I hope you finish this story I love it and can't wait to see what happens.
Kyuubi-No-Kitsune chapter 11 . 2/5/2012
OMG more,more I need more this is getting hot super hot. more chaps

pleasewith a chebi fox on top
Kyuubi-No-Kitsune chapter 9 . 2/5/2012
I realy like this one thus far and dont worry I'm fine. two seizors in 48 hours way to much stress but doing fine now tex me soon.

ICHA-ICHA Forever
Little Messrs chapter 11 . 3/3/2011
Ok I absolutly love this please write another chapter and make it long. prety please with a piece of chocolate on top :)
10tailedokami16x chapter 2 . 11/5/2010
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Dakuenjeru chapter 11 . 8/28/2010
please continue this story it really is a good story
brokendreamer49 chapter 11 . 7/31/2010
Really likin the loveless based naruto plot. very cool very cool. your writing style is really good to and keeps ppl interested. keep writing! XD
dizzydani666 chapter 11 . 7/27/2010
beautiful !
dizzydani666 chapter 9 . 7/27/2010
yer stories going gr8!
geetac chapter 11 . 7/27/2010
I like the chapter
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