Reviews for Finished
queenofgoblins chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
This is OK I guess. Though I find nothing erotic about the words "cunt" and "pussy".
anne-writes chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
this was sweet and utterly believable.

i hate when people ask for more chapters, but i do think this warrants a sequel of some sort.
RedRose102 chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
That was so sad! You should do a sequel to this!
sweet-tang-honney chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
loved it.
villafoo chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
Hope you update soon!
vampirestitchez chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
very good
CYMKK09 chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
Poor Hermione!
Keppiehed chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Oh, so angsty. Your Snape was really good, I could just see him in front of me. Kudos to you. I notice this is your first story, and I applaud you for a great debut effort. I hope that you continue to write many more of the same good quality!
Mrs.Vendetta chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
i love it this is a very good story will you make a squel to this story i hope so...
Emmylove chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Please dont leave it as a oneshot. write some more chappy's please it was really good :)
cuteclaws chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
it would be awesome if there was another chapter or two that was just as straight to the point but that tied this story in. Im wondering if snape does a turn around or leaves things as they are, and how it affects hermione.
diamond-helen chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Such a sad story. The memory is very hot, and it's beautifully written but i was nearly reduced to tears by it.