|Reviews for Long Wait|
| happytide chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
hott lemon. I wish this would have happened in the book. You did a gret job!
| Cutekitty398 chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
that was hot. Great job!
| FairyWeasley2730 chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
your right! there arn't many rated m immortals. you did a great job! loved it!
| TJ1994 chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
OMG i love it
it is great
| robin alison chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
that was good very good... i do wish there here more though... a little bet dirtyer... please make a new one. PLEASE?
| ladybug82896 chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
TAHNK YOU! God I can't believe there aren't that many M rated things for the Immortals series! I loved it it was great!:D
| Jasperbells chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
aww thank you so much for writing this! This is exactly how I imagined it to be.
| Sanraita chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
*sigh* Finally, finally, a decent lemon with Damen and Ever! I was almost losing my mind before you wrote this. Correction: I did lose my mind. I lost it a LONG time ago. lol.
It's really, really good! I love it!
| I3MR1525 chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
This is my first Immortal fanfic and it was AWESOME!
Can't wait to hear more from u. U R AN AMAZING WRITER!
much love :P
| ellla chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
thank you! it was so nice to read an Evermore fanfic and with lemons, yay! and this was really great. you write very well, hope you make more like this!
| City of Night World chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
LOVE IT! MORE! :D
| XxMidnightxAngelxX chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
Very good read.
Is there going to a second part?
Keep up the writing. :):)
| soubi202 chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
This was awesome! To be put simply..
I finished the current books in a week and a half, and was kind of saddened when I saw how few fanfictions there are for this.
So, I decided to read yours because, well, it looked good! And it was! It was MORE than good, it was.. delicious? We'll go with that.
Thanks for such an amazing read.3
| WordsCantBringMeDown chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
| earthangel678 chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
that was really good. everything was so in character. it was a great read, thanks for sharing!