Reviews for Long Wait
I3MR1525 chapter 1 . 11/10/2009


This is my first Immortal fanfic and it was AWESOME!

Can't wait to hear more from u. U R AN AMAZING WRITER!

much love :P
ellla chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
thank you! it was so nice to read an Evermore fanfic and with lemons, yay! and this was really great. you write very well, hope you make more like this!
City of Night World chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
XxMidnightxAngelxX chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
Positively lovely.

Very good read.

Is there going to a second part?

Keep up the writing. :):)
soubi202 chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
This was awesome! To be put simply..

I finished the current books in a week and a half, and was kind of saddened when I saw how few fanfictions there are for this.

So, I decided to read yours because, well, it looked good! And it was! It was MORE than good, it was.. delicious? We'll go with that.

Thanks for such an amazing read.3
WordsCantBringMeDown chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
AH! sweet!
earthangel678 chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
that was really good. everything was so in character. it was a great read, thanks for sharing!
KJChurch chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
Great re-write! You got their personalities down with Damen worrying about Ever and Ever being so impatient! Thanks for sharing!
CaRnAt1oN5 chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
this is awesome!

so when is the next chapter coming?
jrcullen chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Yay! Whens the next chapter gonna be ready for me? :)
Jake's Chew Toy chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Wo! so glad someone made an M rated story for this series!

can't wait til Aly comes out with book 3... more material!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
That was awesome! If they ever do do it in the book I can totally see it happening like that. Especially with Damen nervous about Ever and everything. Great job!
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