Reviews for Long Wait
earthangel678 chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
that was really good. everything was so in character. it was a great read, thanks for sharing!
KJChurch chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
Great re-write! You got their personalities down with Damen worrying about Ever and Ever being so impatient! Thanks for sharing!
CaRnAt1oN5 chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
this is awesome!

so when is the next chapter coming?
jrcullen chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Yay! Whens the next chapter gonna be ready for me? :)
Jake's Chew Toy chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Wo! so glad someone made an M rated story for this series!

can't wait til Aly comes out with book 3... more material!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
That was awesome! If they ever do do it in the book I can totally see it happening like that. Especially with Damen nervous about Ever and everything. Great job!
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