Reviews for After the Wrinkling
3.1415etc chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
awesome!
thebabygurl93 chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Cute ;]

But in the narrative it should've said Charles Wallace, not just Charles.
ProgoIsAlive chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
One thing (because I love prowling and nitpicking...) you have one lowercase "it" and I was like what? (before they kiss)
ASLaddict chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
awesome one-shot! great job!
lcelinaoc chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
I only found a few mistakes in your story (sorry, I correct things a lot). One was that the twins are Sandy and Dennys, not Denis. Also, Charles Wallace is rarely referred to as just 'Charles.' He usually keeps the 'Wallace' at the end of his name. I think that was about it : ) It was really good!