Reviews for China Doll
MissLala73 chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
I didn't review this? Must have been before I started reviewing. So sweetly written, you've put his guilt across very well and also his inability to communicate what he really wants to say. And as for Milllie, it's easy to see why she doesn't want to make it easy for him. I like to think he might try again and she might be less traumatised enough to listen.
CeliaEquus chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Oh, wow. Another great story. I really wish they weren't axing this show! Gaaaah!
Kate-Emma chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Very sweet. Not many people can pull off a story which just relies on script, but this was done well. I loved the use of the China Doll. A beautiful metaphor for our sweet little Millie. The last line got me though. Well done.
Dominus Umbra chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
I like this story. I loved the episode, and I think you wrote this scene well. Thanks.