|Reviews for Writer's Block|
| veterianarian chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
| willowtree1921 chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
i really like this story, again I can totally see this happening. and to go with your comments, i think he's just in denial of it because he hasen't accepted his sexuality.
| wishIwereanime chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
I really like this, it was nicely written. I think your dialogue was fine, and you should definitely use it more, because it's not as bad as you think :3
Oh, this should also be rated M for the explicitness.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Woah, girl, hold up! Misaki enjoys it, he's just too embarsssed to admit it. I liked your fanfic!
| usigh chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
misaki has to say he doesnt lke it to soothe his pride but i thought you did a great job here...
| c0da chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Hehehe, that was yummy. :)
| kitty chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
you don't totally suck at dialog. According to Stephen king (in How To Write) description is the MOST important thing. and i know im a total nerd for doing this, but your writing is especially descriptive and very good. its a fun, fresh read. keep writing!
| SeverusPotterSnape chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
lol... that's really what usagi will do...
| xXDarkerKillXx chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Misaki just never learns it does he? He always ends up getting Usagi-san 'excited'
Loved this little one-shot
| LeRandomReader chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
(And Misaki totally does enjoy it.)
| GurenSR chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
hahah that was really cute, great job -
and you're good with dialogue and your ability to describe everything is simply amazing -
| The Hopeless Wanderlust chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
im totally choking on the lemons...
nicely written, and its cute!
love it. _
| nejiXtenten4everz chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
yeah i think he enjoys it in a sense but he's always playing the "No I don't want this" card -_-" which can get annoying (JUST ADMIT YOU LOVE IT ALREADY!) but hey he has to do something to make the story as interesting as possible but anyways i loved your story I don't think it was as out of character as you seem to b making it out to be infact i think it's pretty straight on what i think the characters would do in this situation oh and p.s. love the line “You’re finding inspiration in Misaki-kun’s mouth?” and how Usami doesn't deny it - must've embarrased the hell out of poor Misaki great job!
| KaiLoVesYAOI chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
It was great! love usagi-san's excuse for a writer's block~
| turtle bear polkadots chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
this was just too sweet and cute in so many ways. loved it.