Reviews for Writer's Block
veterianarian chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
3 it
willowtree1921 chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
i really like this story, again I can totally see this happening. and to go with your comments, i think he's just in denial of it because he hasen't accepted his sexuality.
wishIwereanime chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
I really like this, it was nicely written. I think your dialogue was fine, and you should definitely use it more, because it's not as bad as you think :3
Oh, this should also be rated M for the explicitness.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Woah, girl, hold up! Misaki enjoys it, he's just too embarsssed to admit it. I liked your fanfic!
usigh chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
misaki has to say he doesnt lke it to soothe his pride but i thought you did a great job here...
c0da chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Hehehe, that was yummy. :)
kitty chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
you don't totally suck at dialog. According to Stephen king (in How To Write) description is the MOST important thing. and i know im a total nerd for doing this, but your writing is especially descriptive and very good. its a fun, fresh read. keep writing!
SeverusPotterSnape chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
lol... that's really what usagi will do...
xXDarkerKillXx chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Misaki just never learns it does he? He always ends up getting Usagi-san 'excited'

Loved this little one-shot
LeRandomReader chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
Yummy~ :D

(And Misaki totally does enjoy it.)
GurenSR chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
hahah that was really cute, great job -

and you're good with dialogue and your ability to describe everything is simply amazing -

The Hopeless Wanderlust chapter 1 . 1/6/2010

im totally choking on the lemons...


nicely written, and its cute!

love it. _
nejiXtenten4everz chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
yeah i think he enjoys it in a sense but he's always playing the "No I don't want this" card -_-" which can get annoying (JUST ADMIT YOU LOVE IT ALREADY!) but hey he has to do something to make the story as interesting as possible but anyways i loved your story I don't think it was as out of character as you seem to b making it out to be infact i think it's pretty straight on what i think the characters would do in this situation oh and p.s. love the line “You’re finding inspiration in Misaki-kun’s mouth?” and how Usami doesn't deny it - must've embarrased the hell out of poor Misaki great job!
KaiLoVesYAOI chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
It was great! love usagi-san's excuse for a writer's block~
turtle bear polkadots chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
this was just too sweet and cute in so many ways. loved it.
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