|Reviews for Touch my Dobe and Die|
| Ardent Bronze chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Okay, I really like your rant style and I just thought you should know that hommie D.
| sasunarulvr4eva chapter 2 . 12/23/2009
HOLY FUCKING SHIT I WAZ LAUGHING SO HARD WEN I READ THIS CHAPTER! my family waz lyk, "wtf iz rong w/ her?" lolz this iz AWESOME! cant wait 4 next chapter! sasunaru4eva!
| sasunarulvr4eva chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
ROFLMAO possesive sasuke is the best!
| Rachel McN chapter 2 . 9/14/2009
Brilliant! Rolling in fits here - I love it! when the fangirls are offended, there is a price to pay ;) and where the hell did Haku come from! More, more,I need more! XD
| jesshika chapter 2 . 9/11/2009
you have no idea how badly i was laughing. i had to stop about five times just to catch my breath lol.
| xXkunoichi-chanXx chapter 2 . 9/8/2009
I'm still so confused.. if naruto went on his own will...
or did the fangirls kidnap?
| xXkunoichi-chanXx chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
Oh, good so far.
Suggestion - there are a few K's in there, but I dont think sasuke would think like that, he's much more proper. I think that he'd probably respond with kay or ok. Even though the first one sounds girly... all the more reason to put it xD
And yes, I knew what it meant. I love you too.(:
| ocean-view-luffy chapter 2 . 9/8/2009
Things slipped a little in this chapter. I feel you didn't put Itachi across very well and didn't distinguish if Naruto was there or not (I had to read it over and over). The OOCness was a little much too. Try again, you almost had it!
| ocean-view-luffy chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
This sucked me in immediately. It's such an interesting approach to take, you're puling of first person very well. I like how you're making references to the manga and how we all know how Naruto felt when Sasuke left.
Keep writing! (I'm going to read the next chapter too)
| animelove20 chapter 2 . 9/7/2009
haha lmao .. ii love how sasuke thought itachi was bck && wanted to hug him .. lolz
dont worrii i love this xD
post some moree pls 3
| Lingo10 chapter 2 . 9/7/2009
:O nice quick update ;]
| natcat5 chapter 2 . 9/7/2009
Ah, fangirls...they are scary. The worst ones are yaoi fangirls...they're kind of rabid. And I can say that, because I'm a yaoi fangirl!
| natcat5 chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Lmao, first off, the title alone is just the best. 'Touch my dobe and die', I love that! And Sasuke...he's just...so hilarious. Oh gosh, epic teeheeing!
| PimaBean chapter 2 . 9/7/2009
Bi-polar Haku yay! 3
Anyway, I really love this chapter. It's %100 crack, but it works. c:
| MagnoliaCrescent47 chapter 2 . 9/7/2009
cookies! omfg i TOTALLY didnt see this one coming AT ALL! where the freak did HAKU come from? and u had me really excited about itachi coming back and then u crushed that small hope...or big hope...thanks a lot! haha jk jk but wow, i never knew you could get THIS random...i mean haku? lol wait wat about zabuza! very happy u updated and that this isnt a TOTAL one-shot, even though i do them, annyways thanks again! chao (dont know how to spell it sorry :() update soon please