Reviews for Touch my Dobe and Die
Ardent Bronze chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Okay, I really like your rant style and I just thought you should know that hommie D.
sasunarulvr4eva chapter 2 . 12/23/2009
HOLY FUCKING SHIT I WAZ LAUGHING SO HARD WEN I READ THIS CHAPTER! my family waz lyk, "wtf iz rong w/ her?" lolz this iz AWESOME! cant wait 4 next chapter! sasunaru4eva!
sasunarulvr4eva chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
ROFLMAO possesive sasuke is the best!
Rachel McN chapter 2 . 9/14/2009
Brilliant! Rolling in fits here - I love it! when the fangirls are offended, there is a price to pay ;) and where the hell did Haku come from! More, more,I need more! XD
jesshika chapter 2 . 9/11/2009
you have no idea how badly i was laughing. i had to stop about five times just to catch my breath lol.
xXkunoichi-chanXx chapter 2 . 9/8/2009
Haha, cute(:

I'm still so confused.. if naruto went on his own will...

or did the fangirls kidnap?

xXkunoichi-chanXx chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
Oh, good so far.

Suggestion - there are a few K's in there, but I dont think sasuke would think like that, he's much more proper. I think that he'd probably respond with kay or ok. Even though the first one sounds girly... all the more reason to put it xD

And yes, I knew what it meant. I love you too.(:
ocean-view-luffy chapter 2 . 9/8/2009
Things slipped a little in this chapter. I feel you didn't put Itachi across very well and didn't distinguish if Naruto was there or not (I had to read it over and over). The OOCness was a little much too. Try again, you almost had it!
ocean-view-luffy chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
This sucked me in immediately. It's such an interesting approach to take, you're puling of first person very well. I like how you're making references to the manga and how we all know how Naruto felt when Sasuke left.

Keep writing! (I'm going to read the next chapter too)
animelove20 chapter 2 . 9/7/2009
haha lmao .. ii love how sasuke thought itachi was bck && wanted to hug him .. lolz

dont worrii i love this xD

post some moree pls 3
Lingo10 chapter 2 . 9/7/2009
:O nice quick update ;]
natcat5 chapter 2 . 9/7/2009
Ah, fangirls...they are scary. The worst ones are yaoi fangirls...they're kind of rabid. And I can say that, because I'm a yaoi fangirl!
natcat5 chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Lmao, first off, the title alone is just the best. 'Touch my dobe and die', I love that! And Sasuke...he's hilarious. Oh gosh, epic teeheeing!
PimaBean chapter 2 . 9/7/2009
Bi-polar Haku yay! 3

Anyway, I really love this chapter. It's %100 crack, but it works. c:
MagnoliaCrescent47 chapter 2 . 9/7/2009
cookies! omfg i TOTALLY didnt see this one coming AT ALL! where the freak did HAKU come from? and u had me really excited about itachi coming back and then u crushed that small hope...or big hope...thanks a lot! haha jk jk but wow, i never knew you could get THIS random...i mean haku? lol wait wat about zabuza! very happy u updated and that this isnt a TOTAL one-shot, even though i do them, annyways thanks again! chao (dont know how to spell it sorry :() update soon please
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