Reviews for Forbidden Desire
Guest chapter 1 . 8/19/2018
Too bad Bella is fucking nasty. Why she would want to lick such gross used up pussy is beyond me. And I had all the respect in the world for Edward until he said that he used to participate in Aros house of orgies. Yaaaa, not for me.
parkesy23 chapter 9 . 6/12/2018
Just brilliant. Shame it wasn't continued. Loved it
shannon30033 chapter 9 . 12/13/2017
I don't like it when people's reviews are so negative! Ugh! If you don't like it, there are 200k other twi fics to read! Move on! I liked your story. It's hot and steamy! Thanks for sharing.
candy.soland chapter 7 . 8/12/2017
idk who's book you are talking about would pm me with it
jk chapter 5 . 5/2/2017
Edwards soooo special...that he sits around jacking off to the random noises he hears...he had NO idea it was bella but he was jacking off anyway...
jk chapter 4 . 5/2/2017
that's what bella does? and they call her INNOCENT? theres nothing innocent about a virginwhore...shes going around touching people while their hooking up? eating women out? its fucking disgusting
jk chapter 3 . 5/2/2017
this is how special Edward ISNT...hes sitting in his hiding spot while listening to tanwhore get it on and hes so aroused he has to try to make himself NOT picture what tanwhores doing...If you don't like someone...listening to them hookup isn't arousing, its gross!
jk chapter 2 . 5/2/2017
hes a whore ...but hasn't fucked anyone is a couple years...nothing special about Edward AT ALL
jk chapter 1 . 5/2/2017
so Edward used to be a whore...just like everyone else...and this is supposed to make him special? hes still a whore, once a whore always a whore.

and bellas fucking gross...
this story is absolute shit
Cassy chapter 9 . 2/5/2017
More more, I beg of thee. Seriously though it would be awesome if you finished this.
jk chapter 7 . 10/13/2014
Its pretty gross how Edward just walks around watching every one get it on with his dick hard, and you'd think hed be a little desensitized to it. But no you have be 100% fuckin nasty perve and he called some dudes cock luscious... wtf?¿?
jk chapter 6 . 10/13/2014
Oh no a out of control chariot! For real? Wtf?
jk chapter 5 . 10/13/2014
So bell as a'whore and shell eat out or suck off anyone but Jake? The rude cold bitch!
Stazwrites chapter 9 . 10/1/2013
Oh God, you really need to continue this, girl!
Its so different and unique from anything i have ever can't stop here.
Please try and find your muse to continue this..coz its torture.
JustARead chapter 6 . 7/27/2013
Get it e
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