Reviews for Forbidden Desire
Gasaway Alley chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Verra, verra hot, chica! Such a decadent lifestyle to be sure. Self indulgent feasts of flesh. Edward without knowing is already drawn in the timeless fashion towards Bella, even if it's only her besandaled feet he spies peeking out from underneath another woman's dress.

The tres brothers of greed and grotto hold true to fashion in their own philandering ways. So sumptuous, can't wait to read on.
Havalina chapter 5 . 10/17/2009
Very intriguing world you have created here. The AU factor is well played as well. Looking forward to reading more. Ready for them to meet!
RoseArcadia chapter 5 . 10/17/2009
Enjoying this story!
commasaywhat chapter 5 . 10/17/2009
I think most people who would here about a story that is centered (not mainly, but plays a big role) on orgies and sex, would think this would be someting found in a porn magazine. But the reality of it is that you have a way with writing and making the "unexceptable" exceptable. I didnt think I would like your story much, but I found myself captivated, not by the erotic scenes played out, but the story wrapped around it. Well done. Cant wait for the next chapter.
Viola Cornuta chapter 5 . 10/16/2009
well now what a world you have created, and I truly look forward to how this all unfolds!
TEAM-SETH-1891 chapter 5 . 10/9/2009
I'm so glad you've decided to include something special for Jake. It still breaks my heart to know he's just the 'hold me while I cry for someone else' kinda guy. I'm also curious as to what Aro and them have been up to, I hope you have some kind of plan in mind for them.

Looking forward to the next chapters, as you said you can't keep away the angst for long.

also thanks for answering my reviews. You're the first author I've read to do so.
TEAM-SETH-1891 chapter 3 . 10/8/2009
Im just a disappointed as Bella right now lol. I was really hoping it was Jacob. If you couldn't tell by my name. i'm just letting you know Im going to be up into the wee hours of the morning re-reading this, so when i'm too tired for work I have you to blame.
TEAM-SETH-1891 chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
so the elephant in the room of this first chapter is definitely the Bella-Giana action going on. what made you think of doing it? Im not disturbed or grossed out or anything, it was probably one of the hottest lemons I've read so far. really, it's amazing right now and I plan to continue to read it.

Hope this little review makes you write and post faster ;)
xxxlookingformyedwardxxx chapter 5 . 10/8/2009
cant wait for more!
sakari-x chapter 5 . 10/4/2009
Poor Edward and Bella, they are truly caught between a Charlie and an Aro. I'm sure whatever Aro has planned for Bella isn't a good thing, major perv that he is. Great chapter, thanks for the update!
TwiliteAddict chapter 5 . 10/2/2009
Bravo! The story looks great! Makes me wonder why you took so long to write your own fanfic - you're a natural. And your lemons shake me up - Slurping will forever be engrained in my mind. Your AU appoach is very refreshing also. Can't wait for the next chapter. Yoda?
diremaidenfair chapter 5 . 10/2/2009
you... absolutely rule

I'll be checking for updates!
janneyt chapter 5 . 10/2/2009
Just found your story, it is so hot. Can't wait for the next chapter!
FreezingFire81 chapter 5 . 10/1/2009
loved it!:)
Amortentia4u chapter 5 . 10/1/2009
Great story! I hope Alice can work some magic for those two.

can't wait to see what happens. update soon
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