Reviews for Forbidden Desire
Cristina chapter 9 . 5/7/2012
Please write more chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
Boring...Edward can go on and on and on and on...and on...and on...Wow. Not for me. Too much internal dialogue and not much plot development.
Artemis Iverson chapter 9 . 3/6/2012
I just read your story and I love it! I really hope you continue it! I want to read more!
bellabyday chapter 9 . 3/6/2012
Wow just read your story and I LOVE it! Please please continue this wonderful tale. Cant get enough of my o-so-favorite characters doing naughty things! Your writing is great, I really hope you continue with this story. PLEASE :)
Collaal chapter 9 . 2/8/2012
I saw this listed on Gothictemptress' favorites list and the summary drew me in. I like this story and I hope you continue it because it's really great!
secretffreader13 chapter 9 . 12/20/2011
Really enjoyed what you have posted. The wrestling match between Em and Felix has me wondering about events in addition to the E/B situation. I hope to see more chapters for this fic. Thank you for sharing your story!
mystylady chapter 9 . 10/3/2011
I was wondering if you will be finishing this story, I know its been awhile but still wondering
Kelly J chapter 9 . 9/2/2011
oo loved this chapter! took me a while to read it cause i was waiting for the next chapter to arrive. that way i would have 2 chapters to read. but its been too long. im not mad, thats totally fine, im just explaining why it took me so long before i read the chapter! loved the chapter! its so funny/sad that all these people dont really know what love is, except for the cullens of course. i agree with esme, i pity these people as well!
Julia-S77 chapter 9 . 8/1/2011
Carlisle and Esme were beautiful together xx
Julia-S77 chapter 8 . 8/1/2011
Loved this chapter especially the ending xx
Julia-S77 chapter 7 . 8/1/2011
Great chapter! I wonder what Aro is going to say! Xx
Julia-S77 chapter 6 . 8/1/2011
Loved tylers out of control chariot, very funny! Great chapter xx
Julia-S77 chapter 5 . 7/31/2011
Loved it! Wonder when they will actuall meet to talk xx
Julia-S77 chapter 4 . 7/31/2011
Great chapter! Poor Bella I don't like angst before they get together either, hope they meet properly soon xx
Julia-S77 chapter 3 . 7/31/2011
Great chapter poor Edward being pursued by tania. Great fantasy xx
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