Reviews for Harsh Reality
Guest chapter 6 . 3/19/2017
it was really good!
Guest chapter 4 . 3/19/2017
this is amazing!
yarnfan4life chapter 30 . 3/14/2017
love it please write more
ruth hammond chapter 12 . 2/16/2017
hope you broke your record
you got that reaction to a sick child, it always brings out the best in the care giver...in most people...
ruth hammond chapter 9 . 2/16/2017
Love it! I hope this review goes through, because I do not know which chapters I reviewed the first time I read this story so it may seem as though I have not reviewed often, its because they keep getting blocked...frustrating...
A good story is one that can be read multiple times and still enjoyed...ie. this one of many. Lost my train of thought, but just to let you know I am enjoying this...thank you.
Raven J. Haile chapter 31 . 2/13/2017
This was beautiful. I cannot wait to read the others. :3
Ducky1776 chapter 30 . 1/25/2017
Thanks for this great fic. To be honest with you, it had popped up several times on other's favorites list but I just kept picturing the movie Marge and shuddered. Thanks for making her human!
Deleted User 02.06.18 chapter 3 . 1/11/2017
Young Harry reminds me of a house elf!
rytan451 chapter 7 . 1/11/2017
While I do not know who Tiberius's nephew is (doubtless I will be mortified when I later realize how obvious it was), I can tell that despite the obvious effort you've put into writing, some typos seem to have managed to sneak in.
I have no doubt that if you were to comb through what you have written with a fine-toothed comb, you'd root out all of the issues that did manage to sneak in.
I myself have permitted some errors into a draft I had once written (not published). It was rather embarrassing for me when I realized I had made such a huge mistake. (If you want to know more about it, feel free to include it in a reply, if you feel fit to do so.)

A quick run through all the issues I've spotted: Just near the end of this chapter (7. Day Seven), you used the word "maybe" to mean "may be", that is, "might be". You might want to read through the capitalization rules for dialogue, too. In the last sentence in this chapter, that last comma seems as if it ought to be a semicolon. Also, in the third-to-last line, Marge's first name in full is "Marjorie". And finally, while avoiding contractions in the text of an essay is desirable, people speak using contractions, hence you should use them in dialogue.

Marge was thoroughly unpleasant in Prisoner of Azkaban; it is not inconceivable that the additional years of hearing Vernon's defamatory rants against his nephew could have crystallized her negative feelings towards Harry, to the extent that she would think that she would recommend that the use of extreme force in corporal punishment be used against him. In the books, she was also extremely undeveloped, and your development of her - being bitter and biased by her brother, or at least that is my guess - is a pleasant sight.
sexy Seren chapter 31 . 1/10/2017
Love it
Dani for Jesus chapter 7 . 1/2/2017
Tiberius's nephew is Lucius because his last name is malfoy
Wolfgal2001 chapter 18 . 12/10/2016
hhbut
T51b Moridin chapter 14 . 12/7/2016
So cute. Growing up slowly but surely in a caring environment will be nice.
T51b Moridin chapter 13 . 12/7/2016
I think I have an idea about Tiberius here. He wants the Marjorie heheh.
T51b Moridin chapter 12 . 12/7/2016
So his magic and instinct was to survive but now that he is in a stable environment his magic is not needing to put up as much work thus falling ill.
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