Love this idea! Love your characterisation of Marge, I'm really looking forward to the sequel! Some sentences were a bit hard to follow, but nothing that would make you turn away from the story :) Well done!

*tears fall downsniffles* I just LOVE THE MARGE here! DEFINITELY ONE OF MY FFFFFAAAAAVVVVVVOOOOORRRRRIIIIITTTTTEEEEE STORIES !

I loved this story very much! I'll be reading the one-shots and the sequel soon enough! :D Harry is sooo cute in this, and I love the way his relationship with Marge evolves with the chapters. I also love how different Marge is in this fic than what is usually described in other fics. Read you soon and congrats on a great fic! Kisses!

aawwww

This is a really good story

Wowee. I'd just been wondering what it would've been like if Marge had been a decent sort... I came across this at just the right time.

Great story!

Well this is the end! I usually don't read story this long that only revolves around a young Harry and without action and such. But I really liked yours! I tip my hat off to you Good Sir!
I'm gonna check out the sequel, see If I can bear it as well ahah

It was a good idea, but at a point it got out of hand in my personal opinion - it turned monoton and unbelievable. I think Harry development was right at the beginning (say for the first 10 chapters) and went to fast from there. Furthermore the situation with the guardian whelps got a little over the top, leading to an AU, beside the obvious OC that dear Lucius suffered (and Marge but that was needed for the storyline).
I really loved the beginning though.

Awww this was the sweetest story ever I can't wait to read the sequel. Though Marge should have kneed Vernon in his family jewels.

Thank heaven for gifted authors

Good gods! Must you write all my favorite stuff?

Seriously!

The oldest witch mountain one! I didn't notice that the last time I read this :) I love that movie and this story! :)

OMG! I have a dog named Benji! 0_O Awesome fanfiction BTW! :3

Does NO ONE know how to care for four-year-olds? He's at the age where he's learning to write his own name and put his shirt on by himself, and she just casually thinks he's "helpful" when he makes her a full breakfast? He shouldn't even be BATHING by himself, he could drown in the bath! He can't reach the shower knobs! Marge hasn't washed him at all! If the Dursleys don't even have the patience to give him "people food", how was he potty trained? Why didn't Marge make sure the small child knew where his room and the bathroom was? Why is she calling him names and happily intimidating him because she heard he was a bit unruly?

liked!