Reviews for Harsh Reality |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() My only gripe with the story is that you gave Vernon my name. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perdita? From 101 Dalmations? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dion? He's named after a perfume brand? |
![]() ![]() Ahhhhhh my heart! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Later, meeting Sirius Black, Harry: hey aunt marge, guess what? Padfoot can turn into a dog! Marge: give me a second. *returns a few minutes later with the book* is this fiction? Sirius: as far as I know, no? |
![]() ![]() ![]() kind of wish marge had pushed more to help her actual nephew in his own way dudley is abused as well |
![]() ![]() So what had V & P been feeding him? |
![]() ![]() So you changed your mind and decided that Vernon did tell Harry, that marge likes coffee. Just can't see a four year old refusing to eat. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet slow romance with Marge and Tiberius. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderfully sweet chapter ! I am really addicted to your storytelling ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cannot believe how nice you have made Marge and yet I can see that she could be used in this storyline without totally breaking with canon. It is easier to see a teen as a nuisance where a small child would be harder to not care about. Especially if after the years passed, she had only been told how horrible to her family the child was. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I can't stop reading! This is such a fabulous story ! I am looking forward to seeing how far you are going with this! I really hope you do all the Hogwarts years! This is absolutely magnificent! |
![]() ![]() Thank you for this nice story, I love Marge and his relationship with Harry, the idea of dogs, the Malefoy and the visit of Remus. |
![]() ![]() God this shows a fandom, I read nate and instantly think of the YouTube musician nathan sharp, or Natewantstobattle. Great story so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I do believe that merge will make a great mother figure to harry! |