Reviews for Doctor's Home
deandrab24 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
This is such a good plot-line! Please continue! :D
ngs chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
Hey you planning to write anymore of this story cause its really good and I think you should continue :)
vampirefairy09 chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Awww so cute, please write more soon, i wanna see what happens next. Awesome story.
asherandjeanclaude chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
This is awesome. You should continue it and turn it into a full blown story. You've got a plot, great characters, and a wonderful start. This would be a great first chapter. Its mysterious and cryptic! It is also great because it leaves so many questions unanswered. That gives it the potential to be an amazing story. D
casey26334 chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
I don't know what it is about this story... but I really like it. Most times I'm strictly a canon person, and when I read that Bella and Jasper were brother and sister and Charlie was their dad I was iffy. But congratulations, you may have converted me. lol! Great story. Like I said, not something I would normally read but man, I really did love it! Great job!
ThorinKiliandFili4ever chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
A great story. Very well written.
Bambi prongslette chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
That was so amazing. I loved Carlisle's parental reaction to the FBI agents. :)
CTgirl14 chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
u should write more to this
FRK921 chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
It's great.

Is this like...a sort of middle chapter to your story 'the doctor's office"

?

This could be a chapter 2...and the chapter 2 in DO be chapter 3...you could put it in...if you wanted...

or just put up an AN saying this story id here and goes along with it on Doctor's Office.

I really like your writing...
The Rain On Your Parade chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
awesome! porr bella and kasper but atleast they have each other. really messed up what charlie is doing to them but i love how carlisle and the cullens are helping them :) i hope you continue with this story ts really good
xXxlizardxXx chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
ahh! poor bella and jasper! mean charlie! carlisle is so kind! emmett is funny when moody! well done!

Liz

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Isis1995 chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
It was great, hope you make another one
Boy Band chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
you need to keep writting this story

it's so good i love it
2354 Roz chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
Very good. Nice wording and I'm really liking the perspective of Carlisle. Keep it up!
AppealingToHeaven0202 chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Your story was really sad, it was very cute, though too!

-Carlisle Cullen_1645
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