|Reviews for Ghost of You|
| bri-notthecheese chapter 1 . 1/23
I know people are complaining about the open ending, but I actually really loved it! It felt right. Also this line
"You are Kira. I am L. I would have put you in prison had I won. We were always just playing the game. My only regret is that Light-kun and Lawliet got in the middle of it."
was spot-on. We always see people stating it the other way, where Kira and L are the ones that get in the way but I thought mixing it up was a very nice touch and worked really well. Nicely done!
| daisypi chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
and they went where why did you leave it like that I hate it when people do that so much that I love it
great story it makes my heart have feelings
| anita4869 chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
I love you for writing this. I've been reading several of your stories and I have to say that you are a brilliant writer, but with this one you brought me to tears. Congratulations for a brilliant story and for making me both extremely sad and extremely happy at the same time.
| my mind is blank chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
Another brilliant story. I've added it to my community Death Note Afterlife too.
| mattsmelloyellow chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
straight into what? grr,i hate when people do that! :(!
| Terradoll chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
That was so beautiful! That's a love story, a true, devoted love story. And its perfect for death note. It explains how they could never be together and they'd both loose. Perfect. Bravo.
| MelancholicRain chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
Absolutely gorgeous, I adored it. Honestly the first Death Note story that made me cry, hahas. It was beautiful, and I loved that line about Kira and L, and then Light and Lawliet. Amazing.
| Moth Mask chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Technically, by canon rules, there is no Heaven or Hell. So the cut-off word at the end should be "Mu". But then again, you said it was "A mix of AU, anime canon, and manga canon". Therefore, it could very well be either Heaven or Hell or Limbo or some afterlife you made up yourself. There's really no way to tell.
| In-A-New-York-State-Of-Mind chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
*mumbles* meanie...leaving it like that...MEH. Beautiful.
| sami1010220 chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
,...omg, i think i'm gonna cry! that was beautiful. seriously, great job. from start to finish, there's nothing even slightly negative i can say about this fic. i loved the ending!
| Fairedenale chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
You ended it without saying where they went, even though they probably did go to Hell, given the cirumstances of Light's actions. But it was still well done and beautiful. Wonderful job. Love ya!
| Captain of Awesome chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
"Because we're handcuffed together," I said matter-of-factly. "And I can't find that key to save my soul."
Best. Line. Ever. Loved that you just cut the ending like that. Leaves you even more frustrated lol.
| DemonKittyAngel chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
where did they go! Aaaaahhhhh!
| iphis15 chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
The phrase 'Mu in a handbasket' from Beautiful Disaster is stuck in my head. I must find a way to use it in conversation.
It was oddly sweet- except the bit about Matsu.
Which was weird.
| FireCookie chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
dáww,this is perfext :3.I love the last line because it leaves the story kinda open :P
Keep up the awosme work!