Reviews for Nuova Linfa, Nuovo Stile |
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kennedy2003 chapter 3 . 12/16/2014 Please continue to write the story |
InTheWorld chapter 2 . 9/11/2009 I luv it! (: plz UD soon(: I wanna know what happenes... |
InTheWorld chapter 1 . 9/11/2009 I love it! (:: It's awsome! |
fullmoon19 chapter 2 . 9/8/2009 hey, I noticed a lot of grammatical errors. I won't list all of them down but please check your work again. I think your writing would really improve if you learn to edit. all the same, thanks for the update |
Elizabeth Slytherin III chapter 2 . 9/8/2009 AWSOME I LOVE THIS CHAPTER ACTUALLY I LOVE THE WHOLE STORY ITS AMAZING! |
Shadowdog96 chapter 2 . 9/7/2009 Are you going to update soon? What is Edward going to do to win her back? |
fullmoon19 chapter 1 . 9/7/2009 hey i'd just like you to know that I liked this story please do continue with it, hopefully you can update soon So can Bella/Artemis absorb any power that she wants? I wonder if it would be like the other stories wherein she becomes a princess of the Volturi? thanks again! |
Lazielow chapter 1 . 9/7/2009 Good beginning ! Please hurry up with next chapter. |
Elizabeth Slytherin III chapter 1 . 9/7/2009 I LOVE this story it is so AWSOME I cant believe it its so good oh PLEAES PLEAES PLEASE write the next chapter SOON! |
rocket-runner chapter 1 . 9/7/2009 In order for me to be able to form a fair opinion, you'll have to post more of your story. So far, I think Bella dying her hair is kind of stupid, because I think vampires can't do that...? I'm not entirely sure, but it's a small detail that probably doesn't really even affect the plot of the story. Second, I like how Bella chooses to drink human blood because she 'doesn't want to be anything like the Cullens'. That's a nice twist and I'm quite liking 'hateful' Bella. It'll be fun to see how she reacts to seeing the Cullens again. |
ucanlookbutyacanttouch chapter 1 . 9/7/2009 I LOVE UR STORY! PLS PLS PLS WRITE MORE! TTFN! |