|Reviews for By Your Side|
| spidereye8 chapter 1 . 4/27
unusal but I like it.
| queenoffandoma chapter 1 . 1/17
| hanabimonai chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
This was so sweet. :)
But what happened to #37? What a cliffhanger.
I think #35 was my fave. I can just imagine Kanda dropping his book after Allen sweetly surprises him with those words. :'D
| bite.that.cookie chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
How did you decide on which words to use? Really liked them and I really like your other fanfics.
| pyrodeactivatedzia chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
I really, really love how you did this. It's so obvious that they fit together in these, but it's also them. And it's not perfect, but it's the closest thing to it. I love some of the takes you used on them, the ones that twisted the prompts.
Anyway, it was wonderful!
| kruebblknuwl chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Great job! I enjoyed every single sentence because 1) your style of writing is amazing and 2) I could see nearly every scene right before my eyes.
My personal favorites are
- #11 (because it came out very nice with this "addition" at the end)
- #35 (I can so totally hear Allen saying this line and imagine his face while saying it :D)
- #46 (no real explanation; it just expresses so much)
Thanks for sharing this! ;)
| VergofTowels chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Hop it doesn't annoy you; I shall attempt to comment on each sentence!
1. Yes, I agree. Love Allen's grudging attitude. :)
2. Oh, the violence. And then they'll wager their hair...
3. I love mentions of them sleeping. I think peaceful sleep is so adorable.
4. I can so see this happening.
5. XD Lavi. And language mishaps. Two things that are awesome.
6. Yes! You do a good job with this aspect of their relationship.
7. This one made me laugh. And squee.
8. So is everyone, Kanda.
9. I will never call it anything else. Wallet-raping, indeed. XD
10. Okay, I loved this one, too. I bet Kanda could have an entire conversation with only 'che!'.
11-13. Nice treatment. Kanda's calling and Allen's guilt were done well.
14. ...None of his business, plus Kanda would kick his ass. :3
17. This is sweet. Love Kanda's single-mindedness.
18. Bickering means you're getting attention, Allen! 3 This justifies the pairing, doesn't it?
19. I wonder this, too.
20. Are you reading my mind? XD I desperately want to write a scene like this...
22. Just share it, like in 'Lady and the Tramp'!
23. Aren't they cute? I love father/son relationships, and Kanda and Tiedoll are prompting me to write fic.
24. Allen makes everyone feel better.
25. So. Adorable!
26. I am so curious about Kanda's past... This was sweet.
27. Best. Place. Ever. Until Lavi gets nosy.
28. Made me laugh!
30. Holy crap. Have you read/seen the Ring? When my sister's hair was long, she used to do this to me and I was so creeped out... I don't blame Allen in the least.
31. I would die laughing if this were true.
32. Lavi is very observant. And then he'll yell their relationship to the world in a bathhouse. :D
33. Yeah, I'm really hoping this happens.
34. So do I. :)
35. This made me laugh so hard! I can SO see it happening this way. :DD
36. Tall Allen... M... But the updated fanbook says that the distnace between them is growing, actually. I don't think it'll happen.
37. This one isn't finished...
38. Kanda's silky hair is badass. :D
39. I am very, very curious about Kanda.
40. So bittersweet... :O
42. Overprotective Allen is cute.
43. You got that one wrong, Allen m'boy. XD Probably the one time he won't regret it.
44. Voyeur Lenalee? XD
45. This one is very thoughtful.
47. Yeah, ow. XD
48. So cute!
49. Tee hee. Allen's stomach is manipulative.
50. Aw... Lovely note to end on.
| Hesunohana chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
really beautiful !
| isumi 'kivic chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
You put in so much angst and fluff there, Neesan~~ XD XD XD
Anyway, I absolutely love #5. IT'S SIMPLY GENIUS~ XD
And of course, #10, it's kind of adorable... in Allen's weird way.. XD
I think you did a great job in this one~! Wuff you~
| Cat-Tuong chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Awesome job as usual. I loved them all but my favorites were 02, 03, 05, 08, 09, 10, 13 - 32 (too many to list off one by one XP), 34, 35, 36, 38, 39, 40, 43 - 50 so I really loved most of them The most memorable one for me would be 28. It reminds me of how I'm often mistaken for a boy XP.
Amazing job. Keep it up I can't wait to read more
| Minimin-chan chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
i really love these- they are so epic D
| DNSegawa chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Aw... the last one was so sweet!
And "Wall" made me giggle
| Erendyce chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Hahahaha! The 'sudden' one made me totally lmao!
By the way, I noticed you do quite a lot of these kind of 'fics', with short sentences and themes. I dunno how you manage to find such fitting sentences every time, it simply amazes me :D