Reviews for Ashes
Rayve chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
This is perfect.
Bishie Huntress chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
I love the perfect clarity that exists between these two. I liked the gentle sadness here. It's a very realistic take on Edward's feelings that would exist, even in a future where he had everything.
gaap237 chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
I love your stories. Please right more Fullmetal stories! They are SOOO good!
RomiofAmestria chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
"I'm here, Ed." That breaks my heart. *teary*
Inumimi1 chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
I know this is quite an old story, but I had to comment on how utterly perfect and moving it is. Thank you so much!
JiraiyaWhitney chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
"flaming chicken" haha, that part made me giggle. And Ed, a phoenix? Why have I never thought of that before?
betweenlife chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Aww so sad. Loved it.
BokuwaToriniNaru chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
Why does your writing have to be amazingly beautiful? How do you create such detailed descriptions and scenery so well...T_T

I will try to write as well as you, hopefully one day...

Love this story!
kiiroi yumetobu chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
that was really touching. your descriptions are so lyrical and unique!
HoPeLeSsRoMaNtIc-29 chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
A sweet and sad fic. :(

It was great anyway! 0

Wow! You can write fics in half an hour? Cool! D

Well done!


Constructive Criticism chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
No criticism for you... Very sweet and incredibly well-written. Good job :)
Neellok chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
Wow... I thought I had you on author alerts, but apparently not. So imagine my surprise when I come to your profile, and see three new stories that I haven't read! I'm in heaven right now.

I loved this one, it is very painful, and yet perfect. I like how you tied in a phoenix, and how Roy will help him through his day of ashes. Very sad and poetic.

Great job.
mochiusagi chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
aw that was sad.
wishfulliving89 chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
love the story very cute an sweet and sad. very well written 2.
IOTR chapter 1 . 9/9/2009

That was beautiful.

I have nothing else to say. 3
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