Reviews for Lovely
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
Really sweet. Jacob heartbroken and handsome and a wonderful Dad. Bella falling in love with him. Perfect, delightful, thanks for writing.
mrs.zoeblack chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
ahhhh! that was so cute im crying and it was just...lovely.
GloomingDarkLove chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
loved it its was beatiful
aussieKayz chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Truly a enjoyable story. Loved it.
joygirl chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
I absolutely looooved this amazingly wonderful story! I really think that you should continue it! I would for sure read it, again, and I know many others would too!
Zayide chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
(sigh) there are no romantic...
James Joyce chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
That was wonderful. Great all around. :D
tipica adolescente chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
that was really goodD
aabc chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Such a "lovely" story! Sweet and sexy! Well written and wonderful.
luv4jake chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
I liked it! That was so sad about Sarah's mother, damn! That was not right, but it happens!
faite-comme-moi chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
How exciting it is to see your story in this format. I'm not sure I can explain why, but I'm really thrilled for you. I hope you're getting the love you deserve from the fandom.

My favorite phrase in the whole story is "...this big man who showed his weakness without any fear." It shows us so much about both Bella and Jacob, as well as establishing the relationship that eventually develops. This is certainly a 'lovely', understated story that shows that instant attraction is sometimes for that a passing attraction.

I'm going to go cast my vote now!
SecondSunrise chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
This story was... lovely. LOL! Sorry, I HAD to write that.

No, seriously, it's very good. You're a very talented author.
Reijilie chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
Aw! Jakey was such a sweetheart in this! *swoons*

And excuse me but that lemon? *fans self* nice!

Great work bb. Best of luck :D
Harleygreen chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
This is a really great story! Poor Jacob, how any woman could leave him is beyond me!
LaPush DreamCatcher chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
I loved Jacob so much in your story! A great dad, and an awesome lover ;-)
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