Reviews for Unspoken
MakeMeWantToKeepOnReading chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
thats so sad. i wish i could change time for them.
megs chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
that was really beautiful, you almost made me cry, but I'm glad you ended it the way you sad
lemonbutt chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
I was tearing up. Lol if you read this can you please send me the alternate ending? Please? !

Thier both strong to let go of who they love.
Roslyn Grey chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
I loved this...hate his it ends but I loved it. Could you send me the alternate ending? Id live to read it.
Carolaras chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
Omg! I can't believe what you just did to them! totally unexpected but kind of harsh! can u please send me the outtake? PLZ!
Josephine Baker chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
Hey, are you still sending out the alternate ending to reviewers? Pretty please?
supremeloser chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Hey i just came acroos your story...I Loved It...If you can do you think you could PM me the alternate ending i would love to read it :)
Bookworm D chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Wow! This was so great, I just love Jasper! He and Bella just mesh so well together. I'm glad you like to make people cry because I couldn't keep it together at the end. I was wondering if you were still sending out the alternate ending? I'd love to see a happy ending. I dont have fanfic user name but my email adress is Great great story!
K.M.Browen chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Oh the tears. Yes I cried. I love this story and want to growl at the ending... I just love jasper. Way to go, I wish there was more
MartaS chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Jesus Christ! Yeah I did cry! How could i not, I'm biggest fan of Jasper and Bella together and this ending is heartbreaking... GOD! i'm starting again- this is getting embarasing (i shoul be able to keep my cool for fucks sake!)

Do you still are sending alternative ending? please say you do! I need a happy ending to this story! :)
VampireNight chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
Okay, you can not let the story end like that! I know Bella is an unselfish girl, but that's just too much! You can give up two people's happyness if it means that you and your love is happy. But other than the ending I totally loved your story! It's amazing and I couldn't stop reading it. I love how Bella and Jasper compliments each other and how they really are best friends! Love, A.

P.S. Could you send me the alternitve ending? It doesn't involve cheating, does it? D.S.
You-won't-see-an-iguana-here chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
Hey, this story was amazing. It made me cry. Um... alternate ending?
The Love Peacock chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
This was heartbreaking. I kept on hoping that one of them would just run into the others arms and say 'screw Alice and Edward ' but that didn't happen and Bella never saw Jasper again. I think that's one of the saddest things about this story, they leave each other saying they love each other! :( xxx
Alexandrie Chantal chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
My god that was amazing and heartwrenching at the same time, even tho I knew where it was heading I was hoping with all my heart you'd change your mind and they would somehow be together in the end :)

Absolutly love your work!
fanicki chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
cute story..

just wished they somehow ended up together.

but enjoyed it anyway.
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